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 Post subject: The basic history of Alethkar
PostPosted: October 17th, 2011, 3:40 pm 
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This is the pretty basic history of my world Alethkar:

There are two gods that have existed since the beginning. Isten is the creator of everything. He is good and pure and beautiful. He dwells in Taevas, the place of the glorious dead, those who earned his favor and those who chose Isten over Aron. Aron is Isten's brother and is evil and is confined to Hel, the place of the inglorious dead: the place that humans/inhabitants call Alethkar. (Yes, Hel is Alethkar, they are one and the same...I am still working on the details of this.) Aron has power in Hel, has demons, and creatures such as Fenrir the great wolf.
Basically humanity came into being because Isten wanted people on Hel since it is habitable. He wanted people who would be able to do good and make Hel beautiful. Humanity was created dual natured, the father and mother of humanity being Idyn and Eve. Society started to go down hill as it grew. And in the modern day cities crop up and there are very few originals.

This is my basic history thus far.


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PostPosted: October 17th, 2011, 3:52 pm 
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Sounds good to me. The only thing I would point out is that you have some parallels to Mormonism by having your god-like figure related to the fallen entity.

If you are okay with that, then that's fine. I just wanted to make you aware of the similarity there. :D

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It is? How so?


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 Post subject: Re: The basic history of Alethkar
PostPosted: October 17th, 2011, 6:01 pm 
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In Mormon belief, Satan (called Lucifer) is the brother of Christ. The second begotton.

That was the only thing. :D

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Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

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