Griffin,
Sorry I've been slow in replying. I really needed to be able to think through what you brought up. Let me see if I can work through it now.
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I think number 3. seems a little bit too powerful if you added erasing tracks. It is almost to powerful anyway. I mean, anyone would get sliced down instantly, even if he had another king sword, which would also make it extremely difficult to take its power
You have a point. Maybe number 3 would make the user invisible, except during combat (he turns visible when he attempts to strike someone, giving his opponent a second or two to react).
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I think I would keep out swords on number 6. If it cut through swords and not armor, there would be no way to defeat it, unless you could get around it by not using a sword.
I pondered that for awhile and think you are right. It would be better if it could be blocked by swords and instead would slice right through shields and armor.
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Some of the others also seem a little extreme, like number 5. and number 4. They aren't quite so bad though, because you could defeat those, if you had another king sword. 4. seems a little drastic, since the slightest nick would mean death. It is your story though, so don't let me deter you. And 5. would be impossible to beat unless you had some way to not let it hit your weapon, like sword 1.
I'm going to stay with number 4's trait, but decided that sword number 1 is the only thing that can stop the bleeding. (I'm afraid number 4 and number 1 are my favorite swords and already play a pretty crucial part in my story.)
As for number 5, it is a pretty lethal weapon, but I thought it would be best if it only blinded the opponent if the weapon used was another sword or a dagger (that would exclude shields and anything wooden, like a staff for example).
However, if the opponent is using another king sword, the power number 5 has would be annulled.
If two people are fighting each other with king swords, the swords will not be able to manifest their powers, except for number 1 and number 3, since their powers (speed and cloaking) do not have a direct affect on the opponent or his weapon.
While each king sword is pretty powerful in and of itself, you have to keep in mind, there are only seven of them compared with the thousands and thousands of other swords and weapons in the world. They would be most effective in one on one combat rather than a battlefield (granted, they would help there as well).
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One question: do each of the swords have a king or are they just called king swords because of their power?
Originally, yes, each sword was given to a king, but through time, treachery, and war, they have become scattered among the peoples.
I hope I did a decent job explaining everything. My brain is rather foggy at the moment.
Thanks, though, for your input! It really helped me solidify my ideas and work out several rough spots.