A story I am also working on, it will tie to the other one and is based on folklore from Russia, Bulkan, Africa, Aisa, and Persian.
This story will have elements of good and evil, it is clean and will have some Christian elements in it.

Please let me know what you think.


Modern Day : San Francisco
" Hello , anyone there? hello? stupid old mansion." Teenage Nathan Blood Kicked the front metal door hurting his foot.
"I heard you the first time boy," the door whooshed open revealing a older man with a cane, and rotten pointy teeth.
"um, well, wow you look, you really look like a .." Nathan panicked.
"Like a what boy? what do you want? "he demanded.
" your, I mean you are.,," Nathan stuttered.
"I am Crazy Eyes, now what do you want?" he smiled with his rotten pointy two teeth.
"um, look you have to help me, they think I am crazy, I think I am crazy, I heard you saw the same thing I saw, people, Invisible people and well, oh.. I can see them too" Nathan Replied.
"Can you now? then you know bad things happen when you see them." he nodded.
"people die, theres a person walking down the street, and someone is behind them and there fangs come out and all the person sees is shadows and.."Nathan Paused.
"you try to warn them but they think your crazy and its to late, the person is dead and you think your crazy and at a lost to tell the police what you saw?"He smiled.

THIS BE EPIC. Me wants more.
This sounds like the beginnings of an awesome storyyyyyy!!! Write the rest!!!!!

Aw thank you so much, well here is the rest Abi, tell me what you think.






"yes !" Nathan replied.
" Nathan blood related to Jamie Blood by any chance?" he asked.
"you know her? shes my..." He opened the door up and smiled.
"Nathan I knew this day would come ," his mom let a tear come down her face, pulling her Irish red locks out of the way.
"Mom? what are you doing here?" Nathan was puzzled scratching his chin.
"John, you had better shut the door its not safe to do this if someone is listening." She ordered.
" I thought you were crazy eyes?" Nathan asked.
"Lots of questions I see, ok first my name is John Peterson, and like you I am a dhampir." he explained.
"a what?" Nathan Asked.
"when your father Antonio we had you, our marriage was never easy Nathan." Tears of the past showed on her wised face.
"he use to come home yelling, beating anything in sight, and once pushed you." Nathan sighed at that horrible memory.
"I thought he changed, he didnt, I gave him chance after chance, but he still fell into old habits." She paused.
" yea a abuser and terrible dead beat dad." Nathan agreed making a fist.
"He was a vampire" She sighed.
"yea he was, wait he was?" Nathan took a step back.
" your father was a vampire and married your mom that makes you a Dhampir like me half and half." John held his cane tight.
"What? haha yea, whoa, what? your suppose to tell me I am crazy seeing these things what huh?" his heart raised, every breath became harder and harder to take.


San Francisco: food store:
" The plan is simple, dont blow your cover, they dont know you can see them, there going try to kill. Its taken us a long time to get this close, I want this Russian blood sucking assassin stopped got it?"Blake wanted to smart off at his commander and head hunter for SFHD( SAN FRANCISCO HUNTERS DISTRICT) but as much as he wanted to he could t.
"yea, got it, stay low, be invisible got it." he sighed, it was going to be a hard job catching a Russian vampire assassin.
His team had been looking for this guy a long time two years it took for a case to build up, 18 blood suckings, this one never missed.
He had to be strong.
Stakes in gun Loaded and ready, he mentally checked off a list in his mind.

loved it. great job! I liked the twist with his mom being there too

San Francisco: outside Rex's apartment building on 3rd street:
I hate this day it could not get worse" Jared was human, he was a policeman, it was not fair he had to work with a half human half what is he called again?
" Be nice Jared, maybe he wont bite get it bite" Freddy laughed at him turning off the car and opening the door to the crime scene.
"lets just make this quick and get it over with now." Jared replied.
" ok, but you never know he could be nice, there not all blood suckers, I heard there nice on good days." Freddie lauched.
" and on bad?" Jared asked.
"haha I try not to think about the bad." Freddy smiled exposing his pure white rows of teeth.
" I just hope she does not bite." Jared sighed.
"Well that depends, on good days I dont, on bad days I dont know, should this be a bad day? " Jared turned around quickly when he heard a woman's voice.
" your a ..." Jared paused.
" A dhampir, whats the matter not what you expected? a big scary black haired man that might bite your neck off if you make him mad haha I get that a lot." She laughed at him standing tall.
" oh, I bet you do." Jared paused.
" so dead body is over here, its not like your normal ones, and my powers tell me this one was a shifter, "she smiled with her fangs.
" I dont see the body." he replied.
" Dave and Samantha were on a helicopter ride thought the night sky, he said close your eyes count to three and what you see you will never forget." She paused.
"then he sucked her blood?"Jared asked.
"Wrong Sherlock, he purposed, and when three was up she opened them." He interrupted her.
"and then sucked her blood." Jared smiled.
" no he did not suck anyone's blood !" She yelled.
" whoa, careful Jared, she might bite." Freddie laughed.
" as I was saying," She cleared her thoart." Samatha opened her eyes and blood spilled all over the front window, " she paused.
"and then the pilot sucked her blood." Jared solved the case.
" Okay human, can you let me do th detective work here you stick to the little things while you let me handle the bigboy creatures, sound good? OK then . now as I was saying she looked up, dead body right on the window, she never forgot what she saw, this is Monica powers, Monica this is Jared Shaw of SFPD , and Fred Burtins of SFPD Forensics team." She introduced herself to the grieving Samtaha.