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PostPosted: August 2nd, 2011, 5:58 pm 
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I need some more breeds of dragon.

So far I have:

1)Camo Dragon--size of a cat, grey mottled. Can camoflage itself to anything.
2)Rider's Dragon--size of a Semi Truck. Dragon used for carrying beings and objects.
3)Wind Dragon--Color of fog, long, thin, about the size of a car. Faster than wind in a wind storm.
4)Fire Dragon--Large, glowing red, lives in Tarnation. Beast of the Fire.
5)Smoke Dragon-- Black dragon size of refrigerator, cannot breath fire, but only smoke and in great amounts.


5)Morning Dragon--rare, pink and bright orange, size of a van.
6)Night Dragon--rare, black and pearly white, size of a van.

The Morning and Night Dragon can combine to make one dragon, dark blue with shimmery white and pink, like stars.

Dragons are rare in my world, although once a fantastic race. There are few of them. I have one character, Ace, who hatches the Smoke Dragon, the Camo Dragon, the Morning Dragon, and the Rider Dragon.

I have another character, Jayson, who hatches the Night Dragon, the Wind Dragon, and one more (haven't figured it out yet.)

The Night Dragon and the Morning Dragon both disappear when first hatched. Ace and Jayson see nothing of them until the child king becomes a man through the magic of the two dragons. The dragons, in this instant, become one, although they can part if they will it.

The Camo Dragon is the small dragon that stays with Ace wherever she is. Although all the dragons seek to protect Ace, the Camo Dragon is the most fierce protector.

Jayson's Wind Dragon is also his fierce protector, and full of fight in battle. It is agile, quick, and speedy, but only in the air. The problem I face is, when the Night Dragon vanishes, Jayson is left with only the Wind Dragon, while Ace has the Rider Dragon, the Camo Dragon, and the Smoke Dragon. I feel that Jayson needs one more dragon to even the odds.

I need a dragon for the King of The Lights. (AKA God.) Some sort of incredible and brilliant dragon and the only one of its kind.

Now we come to the Sapphire. The Sapphire is a prophecied child who has extraordinary power with magic. With her magic at its top strength, you could say she becomes a "Sapphire." Brilliant, beautiful, etc. I need a type of dragon that is not much, not that powerful, and simple. A sort of situation where she could be asking why she was given such a dull and weak sort of dragon. But this dragon will be fiercely loyal.

I hope this clarifies any questions. Any thoughts on what kinds of breeds I can add to my list? I try to give the dragons a sort of "gift." Something they are good at.

Thanks!
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-Donn Q.


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 Post subject: Re: Breeds of Dragon
PostPosted: August 2nd, 2011, 9:52 pm 
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Well, I would need a little more info on what you are doing with these dragons, in order to help. Any info on why you need more? What purposes will they serve?

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PostPosted: August 2nd, 2011, 11:45 pm 
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I'll edit the original post to make it easier for others who are wondering too. I hope I put what you're looking for.


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PostPosted: August 6th, 2011, 1:19 pm 
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Couldn't you just have a regular, run-of-the-mill dragon? One with no particular gifts or powers? That could be given to the Sapphire... And why does Ace have so many? Can't you just shift one of the dragons over to Jayson? Or would that ruin the plot?

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PostPosted: August 12th, 2011, 3:56 pm 
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@wRen

I have thought about that. To tell you the truth, I wasn't sure. I want her to have the Camo Dragon and the Rider's Dragon. So yes, I was thinking of giving Jayson the Smoke Dragon. But I see what you mean about her having too many. I don't think I could fit that many into the plot for just one person. Your thoughts?

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PostPosted: August 15th, 2011, 9:02 pm 
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I like it, very good. What kind of relationship does a dragon have to its element such as the morning dragon to morning. What are the intelligence capabilities of these animals? What role do these dragons play in the story? Where are these Dragons found (Select areas or habitats)?

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PostPosted: August 16th, 2011, 10:06 am 
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Thank you for the questions, Aele! Very thoughtful. I will have to get back to you on that. I haven't gotten that far!

Thanks for the thoughts everybody!

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Donn Quixote wrote:
Thank you for the questions, Aele! Very thoughtful. I will have to get back to you on that. I haven't gotten that far!

Thanks for the thoughts everybody!

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I am looking forward to when you do. :dieshappy:

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*waits to see the answers *

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PostPosted: August 17th, 2011, 10:37 am 
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I think I've figured it out. Count my flaws. Ask the questions, please.

The Camo Dragon is of what you cannot see. Persay, an invisible force? For instance, like space. You can's see space and you can't feel it. In this, a camo dragon can camoflage itself when it pleases, seemingly not even there, but its true colors are a dull and colorless body. (Grey mottled). They cannot be found. Has a sixth sense of danger.

A Rider's Dragon is of Earth. Color varies from purple to green. They spend much time on the ground, especially if they have riders. A Rider's Dragon has a seat indented into its back, naturally, so this type of dragon does not use a saddle. Even though they don't fly as smooth as a Wind Dragon, they fly smooth enough not to put their rider in discomfort constantly. But because of their bulky body, they do not do well in an in-air flight. They would do better on the ground. Sixth sense of hunting. Cannot be found.

A Wind Dragon is of wind. It is the color of fog. It flies as fast, or faster, than the wind, and it is always a smooth ride. They are agile, quick, and fantastic fighters in air. At certain places in the sky, a Wind Dragon can sit in the sky without flapping its wings, even with a rider on its back. Sixth sense of speed. Cannot be found.

A Fire Dragon is of fire. It is a hell beast that lives in Tarnation. (Aka: Hell) Its color is dark glowing red. It is fire, it breathes fire, it lives in fire. It has no rider. It has a duty in Tarnation and does not go beyond Tarnation for any reason. Its king, (which I have yet to name, aka Satan) cannot even ride such a beast, or tame it for that matter. Sixth sense of evil. Cannot be found.

A Smoke Dragon is of smoke. It breathes smoke, it sleeps in a ball of smoke, its body is very warm. Its color is black. If it had to, it could live in smoke for the rest of its days. Although it can be ridden, it is very rare because certain padding has to be put on it since its skin is so warm. For attack, it prefers to not use its jaws, but sends out a storm of smoke so thick that even a dragon could suffocate in it. It has a sixth sense of warmth or heat. It cannot be found.

A Morning Dragon is of the sun. The color is a mix between bright pink and bright orange. It does not breathe anything, no flames or smoke, etc. It is a vicious fighter, though. This being a rare dragon, it is not even in the legend of dragons. People believe it a myth.

A Night Dragon is of the moon, colors being black and pearly white. It does not breathe anything (like Morning Dragon). It is a vicious fighter and will protect its twin at any cost. (aka Twin=Morning Dragon). People believe this dragon to be a myth.

The Night Dragon and Morning Dragon can combine to make one dragon. This dragon, though without a name at the moment, shimmers from the colors black and bright pink to bright orange and pearly white. This "one" dragon can breathe ice, the ice being so cold it's freezing like the moon, but burns like the sun.

The reason these dragons cannot be found, although they each have their elements, is because they are believed to be rare and do not want to be found. Dragons that do not want to be found are not found and never will be found.

As for their intelligence capabilities, they are beasts. Though they can be calm, peaceful, and even delicate in handling something, they are ferocious and untamed at the same time. Yet they know friend and enemy, have extremely awesome memories, and can realize, with thought, what is right and wrong. They also seem to know something right before it happens.

The part they play in the story? Don't know, haven't gotten there. I just know they're in the story. That's about it.

I hope I answered all the questions. Let me know if you have more!
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Awesome! These answered my questions perfectly. Thanks!

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PostPosted: December 2nd, 2011, 3:17 pm 
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I like these, Donn! :D Great job!

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Theses sound excellent.
Are those the names your going to use? Or are they place holder names?

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For now, they are going to be the names I use. Maybe, once my world becomes more complex and a plot arrives, then I'll give them proper and formal names.

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Donn Quixote wrote:
For now, they are going to be the names I use. Maybe, once my world becomes more complex and a plot arrives, then I'll give them proper and formal names.

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Sounds good! :D

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