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Author:  Elanhil [ August 24th, 2010, 6:13 am ]
Post subject:  Elanhil's Essence
Here is Elanhil's essence; it still needs tweaking, so please give me feedback!! :D

Body{
__Face[
____Eyes(
______<The twinkle of the stars>
______<The color of the sky>)
____Smile(
______<The sweetness of sugar>
______<The warmth of a blanket>)
____Hair(
______<The color of soil>
______<Tickling his shoulders>)]
__Figure[
____Height(
______<The height of a mouse>
______<The obviousness of a wart on a nose>)
____Muscle(
______<The firmness of Jell-O, compared to wood>
______<The thickness of an oak, next to a redwood>)]}
Mind{
__Thoughts/emotion[
____Fear(
______<The rareness of a blue moon>
______<The enormity of the ocean>)
____Anger(
______<The control of a bull>
______<The heat of the sun>)]
____Strength(
______<The delicateness of a spider web>
______<The solidness of a toothpick>)
____Creativity(
______<The shallowness of a stream>
______<The enormity of a bug>)}
Soul{
__Beliefs[
____Gods(
______<The sun>
______<The moon>)
____Worship(
______<A dance as wild as a lion>
______<A month of solitude>
______<A holy day of a week for fasting>)]
__Gifts[ #Wasn’t sure where to put this, so I chose Soul. :)
____Woodworking/carpentry(
______<The talent of a skilled cook>
______<The beauty of a butterfly>)
____Horse care(
______<The love of a mother>
______<The gentleness of a kitten>)]}
Spirit{
__Position with The Creator[
____Dangerous(
______<A car driving towards a cliff>
______<A fly flying towards a spider web>)
____Actions of Faith(
______<The absence of the dodo bird>
______<The possibilities of a new business>)]
__Position with The Creator[ #In human eyes#
____Wonderful(
______<The certainty of tomorrow>
______<The hugeness of a mountain>)
____Actions of Faith(
______<The presence of birds in the springtime>
______<The greatness of the Grand Canyon>)]}
Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ August 24th, 2010, 6:40 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
Hey Elanhil,
Looks pretty good to me...just a couple of things I noticed about it. Your syntax is a bit off. I realize you were copying from my Newbie's Essence thread but later on in the thread Sir Emeth corrects my explanation.

Anyways, instead of writing:

{Aspect
[Qualifier
(Characteristic
<metaphor>
)]}

It is correct instead to write this:

Aspect {
Qualifier [
Characteristic (
<metaphor>
)]}

Other than that...It looks great! :)

eruheran
Author:  Elanhil [ August 24th, 2010, 7:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
Oh, Yes. XD.. I even reminded myself of that before I sat down to do the essence. I just forgot. I'll correct that. :)

EDIT: Ok, All better!! :D
Author:  Seer of Endor [ August 24th, 2010, 8:57 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
Hey! Warmth of a blanket is my metaphor, get your own! Oops! Just remembered that I never actually posted that essence fragment. *Blushes* Never mind, you're good :)
And, uh, Eruheran, could you not have just told him face to face? :P
Author:  Elanhil [ August 24th, 2010, 9:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
HAHA!! He says it's easier to type than explain. :D GMTA!!!!
Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ August 24th, 2010, 9:32 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
It is easier to type. Especially because he was downstairs and I was upstairs and I am lazy. :P :D I've used 'warmth of a blanket' myself a few times. :P

eruheran
Author:  Elanhil [ August 24th, 2010, 9:47 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
eruheran wrote:
It is easier to type. Especially because he was downstairs and I was upstairs and I was upstairs. :P :D I've used 'warmth of a blanket' myself a few times. :P

eruheran


You where upstairs you where upstairs? Really really?
Author:  Seer of Endor [ August 24th, 2010, 9:52 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
I used Mexican blanket under Characteristic warmth, which is a bit different from your element, so I guess it's all good in the hood.
Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ August 24th, 2010, 9:56 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
Blankets are great metaphors...we can all share. :D

(BTW, Merashath, I meant to type you were downstairs and I was upstairs and I am lazy. I just mis-typed. :D

eruheran
Author:  Evening L. Aspen [ August 24th, 2010, 11:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
eruheran wrote:
(BTW, Merashath, I meant to type you were downstairs and I was upstairs and I am lazy. I just mis-typed. :D


Fixed that for you. :D

~ Annoyingly Pedantic Editor
Author:  Elanhil [ August 25th, 2010, 12:00 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Elanhil's Essence
AND MY NAME ISN'T MERASHATH!!!!!! :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: ;)

That's a huge insult in my world ;) JK. Just try to remember next time.

(Seer, I know what you're thinking...I could have just told him. :roll: :) )
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