Beautifully done! The metaphors seemed very smooth and poetic.
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ February 16th, 2014, 6:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Saen Jadain |
I tried a different tactic with some of my metaphors for this one... Saen Jadain Body: Eyes: Colour: Ocean storm Quahog shells Depth: Concentration Sparkle: Sunshine on a battlefield Smile: A joke between friends Hair: Colour: Sword covered in hundreds of years of tarnish Army attacking by night Texture: A brisk ocean wind Trampled grass Face: An explorer A partially completed emperor’s bust Motion: Grace: A well-trained warrior A deadly lunge Speed: Battlehorse Arrow Strength: Training with a greatsword Young Atlas Manner: A hastily sent letter If only words could be returned Spirit: Quality: Abandoned, cobwebbed fortress Loyalty: King’s bodyguard A soldier who follows his commander's order to charge, even when survival seems unlikely Bravery: There is no foe too strong One who risks all in a fight that is not his own Temper: A castle engulfed in flames Do not displease the king Spring downpour Competitive: You mean this isn’t real life? Gladiator fighting for Caesar’s approval Fun-loving: A big grin A wind that makes all your papers fly away Mind: Clarity: You killed my father Depth: Silence on a battlefield Knowledge: A general You do not have because you do not ask Rashness: A slap on the face I challenge you Fording a river while unsure of its depth Soul: Depth: A hidden pit |
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| Author: | Lady Eliana [ February 20th, 2014, 1:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Saen Jadain |
Beautifully done! The metaphors seemed very smooth and poetic.
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ February 23rd, 2014, 5:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Saen Jadain |
Thank you, Lady Eliana.
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