I tried a different tactic with some of my metaphors for this one...

Saen Jadain
Body:
  Eyes:
   Colour: Ocean storm
    Quahog shells
   Depth: Concentration
   Sparkle: Sunshine on a battlefield
  Smile: A joke between friends
  Hair:
   Colour: Sword covered in hundreds of years of tarnish
   Army attacking by night
   Texture: A brisk ocean wind
   Trampled grass
  Face: An explorer
   A partially completed emperor’s bust
  Motion:
   Grace: A well-trained warrior
    A deadly lunge
  Speed: Battlehorse
   Arrow
  Strength: Training with a greatsword
   Young Atlas
  Manner: A hastily sent letter
   If only words could be returned
Spirit:
  Quality: Abandoned, cobwebbed fortress
  Loyalty: King’s bodyguard
   A soldier who follows his commander's order to charge, even when survival seems unlikely
  Bravery: There is no foe too strong
   One who risks all in a fight that is not his own
  Temper: A castle engulfed in flames
   Do not displease the king
   Spring downpour
  Competitive: You mean this isn’t real life?
   Gladiator fighting for Caesar’s approval
 Fun-loving: A big grin
  A wind that makes all your papers fly away
Mind:
  Clarity: You killed my father
  Depth: Silence on a battlefield
  Knowledge: A general
   You do not have because you do not ask
  Rashness: A slap on the face
   I challenge you
  Fording a river while unsure of its depth
Soul:
  Depth: A hidden pit

Beautifully done! The metaphors seemed very smooth and poetic.

Thank you, Lady Eliana.