I'm no expert at essence mapping, but I like it!
I did sort of chuckle at your description of his anger before. I never thought of molasses being angry. 
But I enjoyed it and it was nicely done. Keep it up! ~Lady Eliana
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| Author: | Kya Lightwing [ January 24th, 2014, 10:56 am ] |
| Post subject: | Hank |
This is my first try at essence mapping, so please tell me if I'm doing it wrong Hank Body: ........Eyes: ...............Colour: Newly finished wood ...............Depth: A pool with fathomless depths/ an endless tunnel ...............Sparkle: Rusted Iron ...............Piercing: A razor sharp sword ........Smile: a fearful dog/ a child hiding something ........Hair: ...............Color: stained wood/ melted chocolate ...............Length: a patch of leaves/ a tuft of grass ...............Texture: rough fabric ........Face: a young child ........Motion: ...............Grace: a newborn foal ...............Strength: a sapling tree ...............Speed: a rabbit Spirit: ........Quality: clear gem ........Loyalty: consistency of the four seasons/ the sun rising ........Pride: a servant ........Anger: molasses pouring into a cup ........Fear: a bird in a storm/ a deer during hunting season Mind: ........Clarity: a prism held against the window ........Depth: bottomless pits ........Knowledge: a foreign language being spoken ........Logic: simpleness of an animal ........Stability: a bar of iron ........Trust: a thin layer of ice on a deep lake Soul: ........Depth: the middle of an ocean ........Passion: cold fire So, uh, what do you think? |
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| Author: | Lady Eliana [ January 24th, 2014, 6:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hank |
I'm no expert at essence mapping, but I like it! I did sort of chuckle at your description of his anger before. I never thought of molasses being angry. But I enjoyed it and it was nicely done. Keep it up! ~Lady Eliana |
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| Author: | Kya Lightwing [ January 26th, 2014, 11:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hank |
Lady Eliana wrote: I did sort of chuckle at your description of his anger. I never thought of molasses being angry. But I enjoyed it and it was nicely done. Keep it up! Thanks! haha, yeah. He just doesn't get mad easily, and if he does, he still doesn't explode
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| Author: | Lady Eliana [ January 26th, 2014, 10:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hank |
Ah, I see. That makes more sense.
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