This is my first try at essence mapping, so please tell me if I'm doing it wrong

Hank
Body:
........Eyes:
...............Colour: Newly finished wood
...............Depth: A pool with fathomless depths/ an endless tunnel
...............Sparkle: Rusted Iron
...............Piercing: A razor sharp sword
........Smile: a fearful dog/ a child hiding something
........Hair:
...............Color: stained wood/ melted chocolate
...............Length: a patch of leaves/ a tuft of grass
...............Texture: rough fabric
........Face: a young child
........Motion:
...............Grace: a newborn foal
...............Strength: a sapling tree
...............Speed: a rabbit
Spirit:
........Quality: clear gem
........Loyalty: consistency of the four seasons/ the sun rising
........Pride: a servant
........Anger: molasses pouring into a cup
........Fear: a bird in a storm/ a deer during hunting season
Mind:
........Clarity: a prism held against the window
........Depth: bottomless pits
........Knowledge: a foreign language being spoken
........Logic: simpleness of an animal
........Stability: a bar of iron
........Trust: a thin layer of ice on a deep lake
Soul:
........Depth: the middle of an ocean
........Passion: cold fire


So, uh, what do you think?

I'm no expert at essence mapping, but I like it! I did sort of chuckle at your description of his anger before. I never thought of molasses being angry. But I enjoyed it and it was nicely done. Keep it up!

~Lady Eliana

Thanks! haha, yeah. He just doesn't get mad easily, and if he does, he still doesn't explode

Ah, I see. That makes more sense.