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| Author: | Mistress Kidh [ August 28th, 2013, 11:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Xsil |
This is an essence map of the way the MC of my current novel was like at the beginning of the novel. The structure is slightly odd, especially for a person, however it is a structure I use a lot as it helps me, personally, to get out the abstract idea of the character. Hisself{ ....Colour: Beads[ ........<blue – Asia – black beads> ........Motion( ............<a whirling kite> ............<rain blur> ) ] ....Colour: Three[ ........<blue – eyes – midnight> ........Mood( ............<three> ............<the delete key> ) ] ....Colour: Grease[ ........<blue – grease – ravens> ........Texture( ............<glass> ............<a manikin handshake> ) ] ....Colour: Sirens[ ........<blue – tinkling bells – shells in the surf> ........Sound( ............<sirens> ............<drizzle> ) ] ....Colour: Old[ ........<blue – sweat – old black dust> ........Stillness( ............<broken fingers> ............<wind chimes> ) ] ....Motion( ........<\Three\> ) ....Mood( ........<\Old\> ) ....Texture( ........<\Sirens\> ) ....Sound( ........<\Beads\> ) ....Stillness( ........<\Grease\> ) } |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ August 31st, 2013, 11:58 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Xsil |
Excellent!!! I think....honestly, my grasp of Lauser X maps has always been pretty tenuous at best. |
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| Author: | Mistress Kidh [ September 5th, 2013, 9:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Xsil |
Haha. |
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| Author: | Mistress Kidh [ September 7th, 2013, 9:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Xsil |
Hisself{ ....Colour: Beads[ ........<blue – Asia – black beads> ........Motion( ............<a whirling kite> ............<rain blur> ) ] ....Colour: Six[ ........<blue – eyes – midnight> ........Mood( ............<six> ............<the delete key> ) ] ....Colour: Bitter[ ........<blue – bitter – tea steam> ........Texture( ............<cold> ............<hands rubbing on each other> ) ] ....Colour: Sirens[ ........<blue – tinkling bells – shells in the surf> ........Sound( ............<sirens> ............<screaming> ) ] ....Colour: Old{ ........<blue – tears – old black dust> ........Stillness( ............<broken hands> ............<wind chimes> ) ] ....Motion( ........<\Six\> ) ....Mood( ........<\Old\> ) ....Texture( ........<\Sirens\> ) ....Sound( ........<\Beads\> ) ....Stillness( ........<\Bitter\> ) } This is a version of the X for when my MC is at the end of the book. I have taken an idea from Lady Katharina and bolded all the changed pieces. |
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