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| Enderion: Essence of Zaciré's Family https://archive.holyworlds.org/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=799 |
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| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 26th, 2010, 1:12 am ] |
| Post subject: | Enderion: Essence of Zaciré's Family |
One of the shorter essence maps I just made while fractalling Zaciré, my main character. I really wanted to find a deep impression of his family and the feelings experienced there, so even though it's short, hope I got my meaning across. Zaciré's Family { Happy [ Close-knit ( <A crocheted doily - all the threads hold together> <A valuable rose - blue roses> ) ] Protective [ Guarding ( <An angry hornet / knight guarding his castle> <Elephants guarding their young> ) Mother ( <Worried / black cat mentality> <Save her son from father's death> ) ] Broken [ Torn ( <Level 1 rapids/ roaring waterfall> <A curtain or veil ripped in two> <A field after a battle> <Boba Fett squatting and holding his father's helmet> ) Misplaced ( <A pair of glasses that are on your head.> <A ring of keys that is always missing> <A child 'too old' for a teddy bear> <Cherised, yet left behind/ The Velveteen Rabbit turning real> ) ] } Let me know what you think. This does use some extra X++ features, but I got them all from the explanation on the 3Literati's blog. eruheran |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ July 30th, 2010, 4:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Enderion: Essence of Zaciré's Family |
Good job. However, I think it slightly confusing that you have Level 1 rapids (the gentlest rapids) in the same element as a waterfall (anything but gentle). I think I might see where you're coming from, but I'm not sure. |
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| Author: | Lady Terra [ July 30th, 2010, 5:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Enderion: Essence of Zaciré's Family |
I never thought of doing one for a family, but I liked it. I was confused at the rapids part, but that may be just me |
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| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 30th, 2010, 10:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Enderion: Essence of Zaciré's Family |
I understood that Level 1 rapids meant the outward appearance of rapids. At least, that's what I was told by someone. I meant the rushing part, the white water, etc. Oops. eruheran |
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