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 Post subject: Shë Tauësoi — Elves
PostPosted: September 23rd, 2009, 8:09 am 
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Shë Tauësoi — Elves
The First Born of the Seven Tribes of Ithelak.

In the fifth year of the world, the first child was born: a boy. He was fair skinned, golden haired, and his blue eyes shone like bits of the sky mingled with the stars reflected in a summer pool. His father and mother, the First-Born, the created of God, named him Ëlwëth. Four more children were born to his parents, each dissimilar to him. First were born twins, a boy and a girl, who were very much alike. Their skin was pale and their hair was white; their eyes so light a gray that they seemed to contain but wisps of cloud. They grew taller then Ëlwëth very quickly. Then wonder of wonders, there was born a boy so dark that he gleamed in the firelight. His skin was black, like polished stone, and his eyes and hair gleamed with the same metallic luster. Then was born another boy, with skin colored like hardy mahogany. His red hair was a marvel to his darker and lighter brothers and sister alike, and his eyes of brown matched his skin in beauty and color. Finally, when Ëlwëth was six, there was another set of twins born to his mother. The first to come was a little girl, golden haired and blue eyed. She seemed to glow with an inner light of the sun. After her came another girl, as dark as her older brother who was so black. The contrasting twins was a source of delight to them all, but Ëlwëth clave closest to Ëniuël.

When Ëniuël turned twenty, she wed Ëlwëth. By that time seven others had been born, each with characteristics and temperaments dissimilar to all the others but one. Each in their turn they wed, each to that one most like him, as God had intended in their creation.

In the forty-second year of the world the Lord Creator called all the mortals before Him, and spoke to them. He declared that He had chosen their attributes for each of them individually, and that He had a plan for each family. He reminded them of what they had been told by their parents about what He had commanded them in their creation: that the mortals were to rule and reign over Ithelak as His stewards. They were to command and to order it in its growth and development, and to fill it. He told them that to this end He would give each family a blessing, apart from the others, to aid them in their role. These blessings were not to be used to destroy or work against His plan, but were to be used as they were to use their hands in His service to His glory. To each family He gave a special language to be used to keep their family unified and distinct from the others. To each family He gave a unique jurisdiction and a name as well. The family of Ëlwëth He called Elves, and gave to his family the jurisdiction of light and knowledge. This was prophetic of the fact that the Elves would be the only tribe to maintain a remnant who had faith in Him throughout the ages.

This gift enabled them to command light to appear and to disappear, to make it change hue and direction, to absorb and release it, and even to weave it out of the air into a fibrous like material that was light as well as strong, and which retained the hue of the light it was spun from. They learned through time to weave beautiful garments for court or war from this material, and also to crystallize swords and weapons. But they excelled most in the pursuit of knowledge and understanding, and were the first to use a writing system for their language.

But Digaleig, the last boy born of the mortals, whose family had been given the name Dragon, envied the Elves their gift. He was not content with the jurisdiction alloted to him, which was that of heat and flame. And he sought to take the power of the Elves, and in revenge for being refused he stole Ëniuël from Ëlwëth, in hopes of marrying her and bringing the power of the Elves into his line. There was a great battle between him and Ëlwëth, and in desperation and anger, Digaleig slew Ëniuël. For his acts he was banished from the circle and counsel of the First Lords, and he fled with his wife to the mountains, where he brought up his people in hatred.

Later that year, there was another birth. A little girl, similar to Ëniuël in looks, but milder in spirit. She grew up, and Ëlwëth wed her on her twentieth birthday. So it was that God mended the wrong done by Digaleig, but not wholly. For later Digaleig subverted the tribes of Dwarves and Men to side with him in a great rebellion, which laid the world waste. They ruled with destruction for 764 years, until the First War of Liberty began. At the end of the war, when all but fourteen of those faithful to God were slain, they escaped in a boat from a cataclysmic flood that destroyed all of the face of Ithelak. After the Deluge, in 1466, the seven tribes began anew on a changed world.

That is the history of the Elvish creation, and now I will describe themselves more particularly. In appearance they are beautiful and well proportioned, obviously very naturally suited to activity. They have deep golden hair, and a complexion not white, but lightly tanned like to the color of a gem. They are lighter in frame than the Men, Dragons, and Dwarves, shorter than the Sylphs, and taller than both the Naiads and the Sylvans. Their eyes are a deep blue, and turn golden with age. They are very keen of sight, being able to see in almost complete darkness and to a very great distance in good sun. This sight extends itself in many cases to a sort of Second Sight that shows them at times, unbidden, visions of things future, present, and past that they had not seen or heard of with their mortal senses. They are nimble with their hands, and prefer to fight in closed distances and on the ground. They are very skilled in this form of combat, and can disarm and eliminate opponents much bigger and stronger than they themselves are, even when armed sometimes. But their great triumph is literature, for they wrote most of the histories of the ages, and have books written on almost any scientific or artistic field.

These attributes are not to be construed to be applicable to all of those who have Elvish blood in them. For in the Second and Third Age the tribes mingled with each other, and so there are many of those class which the common tongue refers to as Mingles: mortals who have the blood of two tribes in them. And during the Great War there were even many of those called Crans: mortals who have more than two tribes mingled in them. After the war and into the Third Age these last became more common, so that they were more numerous than the Mingles and Lords of the tribes. In these mixed peoples, the blessings of God became diluted, and even erased in most Crans. But the attributes which seemed to be retained above others in those mingles who had Elvish blood in them was the keenness of physical and Second Sight, and the quickness of wit and knowledge.

After and during the Great War the tribe of the Elves became separated into various parts of the world, and so each in time developed their own culture. Those of Ülva became secretive, ritualistic, and mystical. Those of Tskarnor became more warlike and inclined to political intrigue. There were very few Elf-Lords in Tskarnor in the middle of the Third Age, most of the leaders of the nation were Dragon-masters, or Fire-elves: mingles of Dragon and Elf. This was the Xzantarian line, which was usurped by the Wood-elvish Cylorians. But even after the rise of the Cylorians the culture of the Xzantarian reign maintained its foothold. Directly after the Great War God led a certain family of Elf-Lords to travel to Minor, across the sea. They reconquered the land they had owned before the war and set up a great kingdom there. But there was perversion of the leaders and the nation split into northern and southern parts, while the last of the True-elves set up a small colony in a forest in Northern Minor. The Minorian Elves (although mingled with Naiads) traded around the globe, and became rich. Until the Fourth Age.

The history of the Elves has become almost a history of Ithelak, but that is because Elves play such an important role in it. During the Fourth Age they were almost wiped out, and there were very few Elf-lords left. At the end of the Iron Empire and the start of the Fifth Age they began to try to pick up the pieces, but fell into mere tradition, and did not accept the truth of the Elvish Creed. That was when the Lord God came down as an Elvish Cran to teach all mortals redemption.

How have you done your elves? Do you do elves? Any questions or suggestions about mine?

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 Post subject: Re: Elves
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2009, 7:35 pm 
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Wow...

I have a couple things to say.:)

First of all, I think your writing style is similar to Tolkien's, and I really like the ideas you have. However, if this is intended to be a prologue to your book, you might consider cutting back on the information just a little.

It's all extremely interesting, but by the end of it my head was spinning with all the history packed into it. Just a suggestion there.:)

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Mindy E. wrote:
wow...

I have a couple things to say.:)

First of all, I think your writing style is similar to Tolkien's, and I really like the ideas you have. However, if this is intended to be a prologue to your book, you might consider cutting back on the information just a little.

It's all extremely interesting, but by the end of it my head was spinning with all the history packed into it. Just a suggestion there.:)


This is just a description of the tribe for all of those on my blog who were dying to learn more about them. :) I have written the prologue to my main story (which as of yet does not have a title), and it is a lot more like a story. :)

Sorry about all the history... there is a lot of it. I have not got into describing any of the rest of the history yet! There is so much more....


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PostPosted: October 15th, 2009, 5:59 am 
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It's funny you should ask that. I've been toying with an idea (that I'll probably use, because I think it's cool) wherein light and dark can be actual, physical things that can be felt and controlled.


My Elves do that. They can weave things out of beams of light. The Elvish Ducahoi can do the same thing with shadows. They make swords and cloth that way.


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Liagiba wrote:
Jay, is that kind of like those cloaks the elves gave the hobbits? I'm sure you didn't copy, I just wondered if yours are similar.


Not always. I might have accidentally got the inspiration from that, but my Xzantarian cloaks are quite utterly dissimilar. The outer layer is woven with the reflections of moonlight in a dark forest, and so it is a very superior camoflauge, but the inside is woven from the glory of the moon reflected on a lake. It is also woven with the fine chains of the dwarvish art. There are also dresses woven from the lights of the sunset or from the glow of fireflies. Very fun. :)


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Wow! That's really awesome. Mind-boggling in an awesome fantasy-ish way.

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Liagiba wrote:
Wow! That's really awesome. Mind-boggling in an awesome fantasy-ish way.


Thank you. :)


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Wow...I WOULD LOVE an elvish cloak like that.

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Sir Emeth Mimetes wrote:
My Elves do that. They can weave things out of beams of light. The Elvish Ducahoi can do the same thing with shadows. They make swords and cloth that way.


Yeah, I've got something similar, although my elves aren't skilled enough to make it. The Ghirandil, kind of demi-gods that created the world, have swords made from pure light. The swords destroy evil, so they could go straight through a corporeal person without physically harming that person, only destroying the evil inside (although, some people are so tied into the evil that letting the sword linger and destroy all the evil within would kill them). Of course, the swords were created for battling demons, which are destroyed the instant a Holy Sword touches them. But I must admit, I agree with Mindy; I would LOVE to have one of your elvish cloaks. Or, oh, a dress made of light. That would be lovely. Your elves sound so much closer to holy, ethereal beings than (most of) mine. Much like Tolkien (and believe me, that is not saying that I think you are copying him, that is saying that I enjoy your work as much as his, and I think that he is a genius. The Father of Fantasy). Thank you for reading this far.

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Elestar,

You are welcome. :)

That really sounds very cool. I have wanted to come up with something like that for my wizards, but haven't.

My Elves are very un-ethereal as a group. My other tribes can be much more transcendent at times. They are different mainly because they were the Chosen people, even though only a few of them held to the High Creed (I will have to talk about my Creeds someplace...). They are not masters of healing, they cannot communicate with nature or animals, and they are not sublime in song. Those skills are allotted to the other Tribes. I spread my Gifts out. :)


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You have wizards? That's so neat! Wait, are they good wizards, like Gandalf was? Or can they be both ways?

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Elestar wrote:
You have wizards? That's so neat! Wait, are they good wizards, like Gandalf was? Or can they be both ways?


My wizards are the Zidain, the incarnate angels sent to aid mortals. They are always good. But that is only because if they were bead, then they would not be Zidain, they would be Zheigor, demons. :)


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Ah. I see. That makes perfect sense!

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There is a lot of detail in there!
You've obviously put a lot of thought into your world.
I look forward to reading more. :)

I'm curious about your dragons.
As you have humanoids "mingling" with them
I can only assume that they are not typical dragons.

Even if we aren't talking about the real world
I've never heard of bipeds and quadrupeds who were able to breed!
Especially since they are producing fertile offspring
(if I'm reading that right.)

Lions and tigers can produce offspring together, (ligers, tigons)
but those offspring are generally accepted to be sterile.
I would assume because they can interbreed
that they were originally of the same "kind."
Not that your world has to abide by the rules of this world obviously,
but I wondered how you were dealing with this considering that they were
created of different "kinds" to begin with.
(I know you are going to have a really creative and ingenious answer to this! :D )

Though I must say I really like the concept of fire-elves and dragon-masters.
I think there are enormous story potentials in those crosses!

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White Raven, I do indeed have a creative answer for that. :)


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Very Very Interesting!
So have these "dragons" degenerated into a dragonish form
from their humanoid original appearance?
Or do they still look like people?
Guess I'm having trouble getting over the "dragon" hump. :)

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All the things that have deeply possessed your soul have been but hints of it—tantalising glimpses, promises never quite fulfilled, echoes that died away just as they caught your ear... We cannot tell each other about it. It is the secret signature of each soul, the incommunicable and unappeasable want . . . which we shall still desire on our deathbeds . . . ~C.S. Lewis


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White Raven wrote:
Very Very Interesting!
So have these "dragons" degenerated into a dragonish form
from their humanoid original appearance?
Or do they still look like people?
Guess I'm having trouble getting over the "dragon" hump. :)

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They all look like humans, albeit with the tendencies described in the thread. But they have a strong affinity with the Wyverns.


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Classic, you have two siblings using one computer and the one starts posting comments accidentally in the other's name. Seize that man, he is an impostor. :D


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Wow, I am surprised by the depth and richness of your historic artistry (although why I am surprised by something a Lauser does is beyond me).
The only thing which made me worried at first was the way brothers and sisters married in the beginning of your story, but then I remembered at the beginning of creation after Adam and Eve that siblings had to marry. Now I'm fine. :D

I love the discriptions and creativity which go into your races and types of elves and dragons. I especially like the human-dragon sort of thing, that is really thinking outside of the box. How many other humanoid types are in your world?

Have you published (like in book form) any of your fantasy stories? Or are they primarily works in progress?

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Wow, I am surprised by the depth and richness of your historic artistry (although why I am surprised by something a Lauser does is beyond me).
The only thing which made me worried at first was the way brothers and sisters married in the beginning of your story, but then I remembered at the beginning of creation after Adam and Eve that siblings had to marry. Now I'm fine. :D

I love the discriptions and creativity which go into your races and types of elves and dragons. I especially like the human-dragon sort of thing, that is really thinking outside of the box. How many other humanoid types are in your world?

Have you published (like in book form) any of your fantasy stories? Or are they primarily works in progress?


Ah, yes. I stuck to what would have happened as close as is possible given my cobha.

There is one blood-race: humans. There are the seven tribes all derived from that one line. There are of course the Zidain and Zeighor, which are angelic beings incarnate, and they sometimes take human type form.

They are all primarily works in progress. I have about 14 novels (4 are non-fantasy) and material for several non-fiction books all in various stages of completion and preparation. Maybe someday I will finish one. :)


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Classic, one of the best non-Tolkien pieces ever


I am assuming this was actually Brendan, as per Fiona's comment. Therefore I changed the poster. Good?


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A Marcher Lords or Ladies should help guide conversations in mature and productive directions by posting thoughtfully and contributing comments. I just thought I'd remind you Brendan.

Oh and I thought that your history was very interesting Jay.


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Behave yourselves you two.

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What? I think my sister and I are like twin pictures of innocence ;)


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This story is great. What type of book is it to be?

Mixed, War, Survival, exc...

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This story is great. What type of book is it to be?

Mixed, War, Survival, exc...


Which book? This is a fraction of the background of the world in which I have set approximately 11 books.


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Oh... what type of books are they?

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Shadow Wolf wrote:
Oh... what type of books are they?


They range a lot. Mostly Epic Fantasy though.


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Inesdar wrote:
11 books! And exactly how many have you written Jay (arms crossed)? :D


I did a count yesterday, and discovered that I have 12 books set in Ithelak, and a few others set in earth (sci-fi), and several collaborative stories. All told: 21.

And a few non-fiction.

Haven't finished any yet though. :)


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Why don't you prioritze? Only focus on one book?

Well I really should tell myself that lesson, I have two books (wince)


Every book is linked into every other book, spanning a period of a few millenia of history. I do want to focus on one, but I can't decide which one. :P I think the Community Story will take precedence if it makes it, otherwise, probably the War of Weaving Strands.


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How about the first one?


Chronologically? No, that and the several after that are sort of a prequel series. :)


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The "first" always connects to the ones after it and possibly the ones before it, and if you don't write them right, they don't make sense. :D

Am I right, or is that just my writing style?

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The "first" always connects to the ones after it and possibly the ones before it, and if you don't write them right, they don't make sense. :D

Am I right, or is that just my writing style?


It depends on what you mean. :) I have one story that is the keystone of most of my books: Warrior Prophet. But it is smack in the middle of a long chronological series of events that are all closely connected, many of which are before it. But I don't want to write that one yet, as it needs a lot of work. It is kind of my prime piece, and I want it to be perfect. :)


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