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PostPosted: January 24th, 2013, 12:27 am 
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In my voluminous reading of the past several months, I've come across more than one sentence or paragraph that really caught my eye and made me think, "I need to write that down." I've been compiling a screen full of sticky notes with random pieces of useful information, mainly revolving around writing but also dealing with aspects of publishing, marketing, etc. So I've decided not to keep all these nuggets of advice to myself, thus the purpose of this topic. If anyone else has something to share related to writing, publishing, and various offshoots, feel free to post it here. I'll start it off.

In writing. Don't use adjectives which merely tell us how to feel about the thing you are describing. I mean, instead of telling us a thing was "terrible," describe if so that we'll be terrified. Don't say that it was "delightful"; make us say "delightful" when we've read the description. You see, all those words (horrifying, wonderful, hideous, exquisite) are only like saying to your readers, "Please will you do my job for me." ~ C.S. Lewis

If a work enchants us in the reading by the elegant succession of its parts, and yet leaves in our memories no distinct impression of itself as a whole--in such cases, there is something radically wrong with its paternal idea. ~ Dorothy L. Sayers

In reality, there is one reason, and one reason only, that readers get excited about a novel: great storytelling. ~ Donald Maass

The writer distracts the reader--breaks the film, if you will--when by some slip of technique or egoistic intrusion he allows or forces the reader to stop thinking about the story (stop "seeing" the story) and think about something else. ~ John Gardner

Your first chapter sells your book. Your last chapter sells your NEXT book. ~ Mickey Spillane

Hope that helps! :)

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PostPosted: January 24th, 2013, 10:05 am 
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The one by Dorothy Sayers I've found to be quite true (not that I've found the others any less true, of course :)). I'd never heard anyone say anything about it before though. Good quote.


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PostPosted: January 24th, 2013, 1:42 pm 
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You need not expect to get your book right the first time. Go to work and revamp or rewrite it. God only exhibits his thunder and lightning at intervals, and so they always command attention. These are God's adjectives. You thunder and lightning too much; the reader ceases to get under the bed, by and by. ~Mark Twain

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PostPosted: February 13th, 2013, 11:52 pm 
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I like that one, E. Here are some more.

"By and large the fortunes of fiction writers depend on a certain kind of magic. What is that magic? In the business, it is called 'word of mouth.'" ~ Donald Maass

"The vital power of an imaginative work demands a diversity within its unity; and the stronger the diversity the more massive the unity." ~ Dorothy L. Sayers

"When you steal from one author, it's plagiarism; if you steal from many, it's research." ~ Wilson Minzer

"In a story that working, the protagonist is central to the narrative. He's making choices (often unwise, foolish choices), and those choices help drive the story forward. And the engine that propels the story purrs so softly, you barely even notice it. In that sense, when a writer nails her story, it feels as if the story has written itself. As Flannery O'Connor said, a good ending is both surprising and inevitable. That's true not just of endings but of everything that happens in a story. The writer sets things in motion and then gets out of the way." ~ Joshua Henkin

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Works in progress

The Skyriders Trilogy (outlining)

What Waits in Shadow (fantasy short story--editing)
The Stranger's Gift (fantasy short story--editing)
The Crystal Orb (fantasy short story--writing)
And too many half-started ideas to count


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PostPosted: March 14th, 2013, 5:12 am 
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These are really good! Thanks for starting this thread, Tarin. Helpful reading. :)

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Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

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PostPosted: April 28th, 2013, 1:20 pm 
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Ugggh I LOVE that CS Lewis quote! Brilliance.
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