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 Post subject: Taiven's Essence
PostPosted: May 11th, 2010, 11:32 am 
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:D Ok. After looking at one or two Essence maps, I thought I would do my own, since it looked like fun (it was). So bear with me on my first map...

… Body {Eyes……..[Color… (glimmering Amethyst)
………………………………..(the darkest shade of purple in the sunset sky)
……………………..[Depth…(a cave so dark, that you can not tell if it ends)
………………………………..(a rainbow with seemingly no end)
…………………......[Sparkle. (the first rays of sun after a solar eclipse)
………………………………..(sizzling electric sparks)
………………………………..(the stars of a moonless night)]}
………..{Smile……………….(a child looking into the eyes of it‘s mother)
………………………………..(rare as a shooting star)
………………………………..(the sunlight peeking out from behind a cloud)}
……….{Hair…..…[Color.........(the blackest of raven feathers)
………………………………...(pure and utter darkness)]
……………………[Texture…..(obsidian silk)}
……….{Motion………………(wind that whips through open plains)
……………………….………..(the fleeting glance of a lover)
……………………….………..(a graceful swan)
……………………[Agility…..(a cheetah running on the savannah)}
................................[Speed..….(swing of a trained knights sword)
……………………….………..(a flash of lightning)
..................................................(an animal running from it‘s enemies)]}
……….{Beauty…………….…(a black rose)
………………………………..(a ugly duckling transformed to a swan)
………………………………..(a new star burning brightly in the night sky)]}
…………………[Voice………(the sweet trill of a birds morning song)
………………………………..(honey)}]


……..{Spirit…………[Quality…..(a humble servant)
……………………………….........(a fiery warrior)]
………………………[Fear……….(losing what is precious to you)]
………………………[Loyalty.…..(a dog that follows his master)}


……..{Mind…………[Clarity……(still water)]
………………………[Depth……..(a quiz, the answers unknown)
……………………………….........(a child looking into it’s mothers eyes)]
……………………[Knowledge.…(a wise teacher)
………………………………..........(a clever dragon)
………………………………..........(a curious child)]}


……..{Soul……..[Depth..….…(looking into the eyes of the one you love)
………………………………..........(the horizon)
………………………………..........(endless space)]
…………………….[Purity…..…..(sand struck by lightning)
………………………………..........(as clear as the best diamond)]
……………………[Longing……(an orphan without loving hands to be enveloped in)
………………………………..........(to find true happiness)
………………………………..........(to belong)]}

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Follow Pathaar; give Him your life,
He’ll lead you from the present strife.
Become his weapon, the gilded knife,
Be his music, the rhythmic fife.


Serenade: 31,256 words


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 Post subject: Re: Serena's Essence-my first try
PostPosted: June 16th, 2010, 10:43 am 
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Good job! I am pleased to see so many people stepping out and trying out essence mapping.


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 Post subject: Re: Serena's Essence-my first try
PostPosted: June 16th, 2010, 10:44 am 
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I was wondering if someone would make an Avatar for me using this Essence. :)

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Follow Pathaar; give Him your life,
He’ll lead you from the present strife.
Become his weapon, the gilded knife,
Be his music, the rhythmic fife.


Serenade: 31,256 words


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 Post subject: Re: Taiven's Essence
PostPosted: June 16th, 2010, 5:46 pm 
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Great job with the essence map! There were lots of beautiful metaphors in there. :D

I think you've already talked to White Raven about the avatar, so I don't need to give you directions. ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Taiven's Essence
PostPosted: June 17th, 2010, 10:14 am 
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Great job, Taiven! When I read this I saw a very clear picture of your character. I like her already. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Taiven's Essence
PostPosted: June 17th, 2010, 10:20 am 
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Thanks, it was my first try, but I guess I did pretty good! :)

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-Samuel Johnson

Follow Pathaar; give Him your life,
He’ll lead you from the present strife.
Become his weapon, the gilded knife,
Be his music, the rhythmic fife.


Serenade: 31,256 words


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 Post subject: Re: Taiven's Essence
PostPosted: June 17th, 2010, 12:23 pm 
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Nicely done. Can't wait to see what you do with ECSSBasic (it's the structure/syntax that I use in most of my maps). I think you'd have fun with it.

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