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| Author: | Taiven Knight [ May 11th, 2010, 11:32 am ] |
| Post subject: | Taiven's Essence |
… Body {Eyes……..[Color… (glimmering Amethyst) ………………………………..(the darkest shade of purple in the sunset sky) ……………………..[Depth…(a cave so dark, that you can not tell if it ends) ………………………………..(a rainbow with seemingly no end) …………………......[Sparkle. (the first rays of sun after a solar eclipse) ………………………………..(sizzling electric sparks) ………………………………..(the stars of a moonless night)]} ………..{Smile……………….(a child looking into the eyes of it‘s mother) ………………………………..(rare as a shooting star) ………………………………..(the sunlight peeking out from behind a cloud)} ……….{Hair…..…[Color.........(the blackest of raven feathers) ………………………………...(pure and utter darkness)] ……………………[Texture…..(obsidian silk)} ……….{Motion………………(wind that whips through open plains) ……………………….………..(the fleeting glance of a lover) ……………………….………..(a graceful swan) ……………………[Agility…..(a cheetah running on the savannah)} ................................[Speed..….(swing of a trained knights sword) ……………………….………..(a flash of lightning) ..................................................(an animal running from it‘s enemies)]} ……….{Beauty…………….…(a black rose) ………………………………..(a ugly duckling transformed to a swan) ………………………………..(a new star burning brightly in the night sky)]} …………………[Voice………(the sweet trill of a birds morning song) ………………………………..(honey)}] ……..{Spirit…………[Quality…..(a humble servant) ……………………………….........(a fiery warrior)] ………………………[Fear……….(losing what is precious to you)] ………………………[Loyalty.…..(a dog that follows his master)} ……..{Mind…………[Clarity……(still water)] ………………………[Depth……..(a quiz, the answers unknown) ……………………………….........(a child looking into it’s mothers eyes)] ……………………[Knowledge.…(a wise teacher) ………………………………..........(a clever dragon) ………………………………..........(a curious child)]} ……..{Soul……..[Depth..….…(looking into the eyes of the one you love) ………………………………..........(the horizon) ………………………………..........(endless space)] …………………….[Purity…..…..(sand struck by lightning) ………………………………..........(as clear as the best diamond)] ……………………[Longing……(an orphan without loving hands to be enveloped in) ………………………………..........(to find true happiness) ………………………………..........(to belong)]} |
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| Author: | Whythawye [ June 16th, 2010, 10:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Serena's Essence-my first try |
Good job! I am pleased to see so many people stepping out and trying out essence mapping. |
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| Author: | Taiven Knight [ June 16th, 2010, 10:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Serena's Essence-my first try |
I was wondering if someone would make an Avatar for me using this Essence. |
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| Author: | Ciela Rose [ June 16th, 2010, 5:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Taiven's Essence |
Great job with the essence map! There were lots of beautiful metaphors in there. I think you've already talked to White Raven about the avatar, so I don't need to give you directions. |
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| Author: | Celestria [ June 17th, 2010, 10:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Taiven's Essence |
Great job, Taiven! When I read this I saw a very clear picture of your character. I like her already. |
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| Author: | Taiven Knight [ June 17th, 2010, 10:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Taiven's Essence |
Thanks, it was my first try, but I guess I did pretty good! |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ June 17th, 2010, 12:23 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Taiven's Essence |
Nicely done. Can't wait to see what you do with ECSSBasic (it's the structure/syntax that I use in most of my maps). I think you'd have fun with it. |
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