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| Author: | Aris Hunter [ March 27th, 2012, 8:31 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Chayn | 
| This is my first FirstX map. I've already done a map for Chayn, but I have heard that essence map avatars are made from this style.  Scales: —Color: The pastel blue sky, a robin's eggs —Motion: Sunshine's underwater rippling reflection —Shine: The sunshine on sapphires, a newly polished mirror —Size: A balled up fist, a tennis ball, or a ping-pong ball (for scales on her head) —Hardness: the strength of a thousand diamonds, the rocky face of the mountain —Thickness: the armor of soldiers, the glinting steel of a shield —Texture: rocks that have been worn smooth, rippling silk Eyes: —Color: The bottom of a lake, the dark depths of the ocean —Sparkle: The tiny stars at twilight —Depth: A deep well, the ocean glittering with stars —Motion: Talons, teeth, back spikes, and horns: —Color: A bed of milky pearls, puffy clouds —Sharpness: New swords, sewing needles —Texture: Hard bone, polished smooth Strength: —Of Body: Two giants, the severity of a thunderstorm, a firm but gentle hand —Of Mind: A city wall, flawed, but still strong to withstand many attacks Wings: —Power: The arms of a veteran farmer, a ferocious windstorm —Strength: Tough weather-beaten canvas, thick tree boughs Tail: —Size: The width of a tree trunk —Texture (fur at the end of her tail): The richest of all animal furs, silky smooth —Color (fur): The rippling ocean surface at night. Loyalty: —Endurance: Unless betrayed, forever and always —Amount: A husband's wife, in sickness and in health Love: —Amount: A neverending fountain —Intensity: Sunshine, "true love's first kiss" Anger: —Intensity: A roaring sea in a violent storm —Danger (for whoever makes her angry): A mother bear robbed of her cubs | |
| Author: | RunningWolf [ April 28th, 2012, 7:11 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Chayn | 
| Nice, I like it.  From the first paragraph I get lots of detail about your (is it a dragon?) character's appearance. I especially liked a few different parts, here's on of them: Lady Aris Lillylight wrote: Talons, teeth, back spikes, and horns: —Color: A bed of milky pearls, puffy clouds —Sharpness: New swords, sewing needles —Texture: Hard bone, polished smooth I like how you used metaphors that would connect with all of the things listed in that category. Good job.   | |
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