Hey there, id have scripture in my first rough draft, but when I go to re-write it and fix any errors, id like to have scripture in there, but how do I hide it?

Any ideas??

Our King is in it, directly...and I don't know if I should leave him mentioned plain, or "hide" him too?

Thanks,
Heather

Perhaps the easiest way to do that would be to paraphrase Bible verses, have them be from a "holy book" of some sort that is the fantasy world's Bible version, and call God by one of His lesser known names, such as Jehovah. If your fantasy world is connected with earth, however, then there is probably a way to put the real Bible into it without it seeming out of place.

okay thanks I really appreciate it.



Heather

You're welcome, Heather.