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Author:  Taiven Knight [ April 27th, 2010, 7:39 am ]
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Well, the large forest in my world (I will post a map on the Geography and Flora page when I finish it) is called the Betsalela forest (it is two words that mean 'shadow' mixed together. So it's the Shadow forest) Anyway, I am thinking of writing about a small 'tribe' in the forest known as the Betsalela Keepers, they would be mini dragons. (around the size of a normal stuffed bear) These dragons would be the 'Keepers' of the forest. I haven't really gotten much detail into this subject, but I wanted to see what everyone thought before I started writing about them. :D

--- Is this in the right section? I've only posted in a few places, so I'm not sure where everything is..
Author:  Lady Terra [ April 27th, 2010, 7:41 am ]
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Would they be cute? or ugly? I think it's a good idea :D
Author:  Taiven Knight [ April 27th, 2010, 7:42 am ]
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Well me being a person who likes 'cute' things, they would be more or less like a smaller, cuter verison then the large dragons in my book. :)
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 27th, 2010, 2:33 pm ]
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If they are sentinent, then this is the right place, otherwise, you might want to have put it in Creatures.

That kind of asks my first question. How intelligent are they? Would they lean toward evil or good? Are they the only creatures in the forest?
Author:  Taiven Knight [ April 27th, 2010, 3:08 pm ]
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Oh ok, then this probably should be in the Creatures page.... To answer you questions, they would probably be fairly smart, though they are not as smart as humans, and would have certain limits on their knowledge because of that. Besides birds and the normal type of woodland creatures, they would be the only animals in the forests. :D Also, they would probably lean more towards the Good side.
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 27th, 2010, 3:12 pm ]
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I might be able to move it, but I think you need a Marcher Lord of Sir Emeth to move it. The Marcher Lords are the ones with the yellow names.
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 27th, 2010, 3:13 pm ]
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Nope, you need a Marcher Lord, sorry.
Author:  Taiven Knight [ April 27th, 2010, 3:16 pm ]
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Alright. Well, I will see if I can find out how to do that...
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 27th, 2010, 3:20 pm ]
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I would just send a pm (private message) to Sir Emeth. Just go up to the top where it says UCP and click on that. There should be sum tabs on the right and one should say something about private messaging. You should be able to take it from there.
Author:  Lady Terra [ April 27th, 2010, 3:21 pm ]
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Now I know where to go if I need help! thanks :D Good luck Serena ;)
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 27th, 2010, 3:36 pm ]
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Wait! I can move it! Do you want me to?
Author:  Taiven Knight [ April 27th, 2010, 3:38 pm ]
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Sure. I will send another PM back to Sir Emeth saying you have already done it.
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 27th, 2010, 3:48 pm ]
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There ya go! :D
Author:  Lady Terra [ April 28th, 2010, 6:53 am ]
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Can I say "YAY!".... or is that too much ;)
Author:  Taiven Knight [ April 28th, 2010, 7:35 am ]
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Thank you very much Griffin :D
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 28th, 2010, 10:20 am ]
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Lady Terra wrote:
Can I say "YAY!".... or is that too much ;)


Go ahead!

Serena Knight wrote:
Thank you very much Griffin :D


You're welcome! :D
Author:  Kenton D. Long [ May 5th, 2010, 6:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Betsalela Keepers
My main character is a Dragon Keeper who, obviously, keeps dragons. Athdyn, one of his dragons is about the size of a small cat. He can send photos/visual and thoughts, but yes, he is not as smart as humans, elves, and dwarves. So yes, I think your idea is a very good one.


...I took the mini dragon idea from a book that was lent to me by one of the youth member's mom at my church... I will get the name for you. I think she stole the same idea from some other writer too.
Author:  Melody Kondrael [ May 5th, 2010, 7:15 pm ]
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So they're meant to be cute? Or are they the Reepicheeps of the dragon race? ;)
Author:  Taiven Knight [ May 6th, 2010, 8:57 am ]
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Is the book by 'Donita K. Paul' because she has mini dragons in her book... which is probably where my mind pulled the idea from..

Well, they are supposed to look like mini dragons, and the dragons in my world aren't scary, though they aren't fluffy cute either... probably in between cute and scary. lol. :D
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ May 10th, 2010, 9:36 am ]
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Melody Kondrael wrote:
So they're meant to be cute? Or are they the Reepicheeps of the dragon race? ;)


I don't think Reepicheep would take that as a complement. ;)
Author:  Taiven Knight [ May 11th, 2010, 7:48 am ]
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Yeah :) probably not
Author:  Kiev Shawn [ August 11th, 2010, 9:55 am ]
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I love DKP's books! I want to read your story now! :)
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