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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ March 30th, 2010, 4:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Corrin's Essence |
Here's my reposting of my first essence map. The first one got deleted last night Body {Sight [Color (a liquid rose in a glass vase) …………………………….(a shard of the setting sun) …………………………….(a glowing coal)] .................[Clarity (pitcher of Koolaid) …………………………….(stained glass) …………………………….(light through the water)] ………………...[Luster (the summer sun on the lake) …………………………….(like glass splinters when sweeping up a broken dish) …………………………….(sunset reflected off a dragonfly’s wing) …………………………….(Labrador's eyes)]} Cobha {Nature […..(the shock of a mountain view) …………………………….(the mile in another’s moccasins) …………………………….(wake up bugle) …………………………….(the ray of light on the sleeping eye) …………………………….(spotlight in the fog) …………………………….(a peeling knife removing outer layers, exposing what’s beneath)] …………Purpose [….(light house in a storm) …………………………….(flashlight in a cave) …………………………….(a new angle) …………………………….(Gandalf)]} Soul { [Color............(the red flame at the heart of a Ruby)] ….....Aspect [Gender (an old lighthouse keeper) …………………………….(Strider the Ranger) …………………………….(older brother)] ……………………[Role (the silent dog that guides the way) …………………………...(silent point) …………………………...(loving slap upside the head)] ……….Depth [………(German Shepherd’s eyes) ……………………………(an eagle’s cry) ……………………………(whale song) ……………………………(desert wind) ……………………………(starlit sky) ……………………………(coyote howl)]} In Christ, Jordan |
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| Author: | Mama Raven Mimetes [ March 30th, 2010, 6:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Mr. Squishy wrote: Cobha {Nature […..(the shock of a mountain view) …………………………….(the mile in another’s moccasins) …………………………….(wake up bugle) …………………………….(the ray of light on the sleeping eye) …………………………….(spotlight in the fog) …………………………….(a peeling knife removing outer layers, exposing what’s beneath)] ………………..….[Gender (an old lighthouse keeper) …………………………….(Strider the Ranger) …………………………….(older brother)] ……….Depth [………(German Shepherd’s eyes) ……………………………(an eagle’s cry) ……………………………(whale song) ……………………………(desert wind) ……………………………(starlit sky) ……………………………(coyote howl) Jordan, Excellent job! I quoted my favorite parts of your map. I love the depth of thought you've put into it. The first part I posted up there about the penetrating nature of the stone is probably the best in my opinion. Very good word pictures. I also liked the "loving slap upside the head" line... nice! lol Keep up the good work! ~Raven |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ March 30th, 2010, 8:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Thanks! It really wasn't as hard as I thought it would be, and it was lots of fun once I got into it. And since "somebody" has challenged me, I'll have to work on some more My favorite part was your favorite, the essential nature of Corrin. Working on this part helped me realize just what Corrin was and how he works. It even helped me realize that I had previously given him to the wrong wielder. Thanks to you and to everyone for the encouragement. In Christ, Jordan |
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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ April 2nd, 2010, 11:52 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Wow, you did a really good job! Essence looks really intimidating until you do it. It's really not that hard! |
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| Author: | Whythawye [ April 3rd, 2010, 4:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Wow, I think that was one of the best essence maps I have seen on here so far! You use your imagination as a powerful tool. I can't wait to see what you will do with ECSS++!! |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ April 3rd, 2010, 11:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
*blushes* Thanks. ECSS++ ? Does the madness never end |
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| Author: | Whythawye [ April 3rd, 2010, 12:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Mr. Squishy wrote: *blushes* Thanks. ECSS++ ? Does the madness never end Nope, never. |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ April 3rd, 2010, 8:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Sir Emeth Mimetes wrote: Mr. Squishy wrote: *blushes* Thanks. ECSS++ ? Does the madness never end Nope, never. |
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| Author: | Ciela Rose [ April 3rd, 2010, 8:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Beautiful essence map, Jordan. I could really visualize Corrin, inside and out. Your essence map is also the first one to describe an inanimate object, so this is a trailblazer in my mind. Lovely artistry! I liked so many parts that I can't post them here without literally rewriting the map By the way, can someone enlighten me on what ECSS++ means? Or is it something that I don't need to know? Guess I'm just nosy. |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ April 3rd, 2010, 9:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Ciela Rose wrote: By the way, can someone enlighten me on what ECSS++ means? Or is it something that I don't need to know? Guess I'm just nosy. Basic explanation. The system for mapping we use is called ECSS (I think it stands for Essence Cascading Style Sheet). ECSS++ is an advanced form of ECSS...I think Ciela Rose wrote: Beautiful essence map, Jordan. I could really visualize Corrin, inside and out. Your essence map is also the first one to describe an inanimate object, so this is a trailblazer in my mind. Lovely artistry! I liked so many parts that I can't post them here without literally rewriting the map Thanks!In Christ, Jordan |
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| Author: | Whythawye [ April 7th, 2010, 2:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Mr. Squishy wrote: Basic explanation. The system for mapping we use is called ECSS (I think it stands for Essence Cascading Style Sheet). ECSS++ is an advanced form of ECSS...I think Very good. It is very much more advanced. Lots of new features. It has exponentially greater power of description. |
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| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 30th, 2010, 10:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Great map, Seer! I now stand corrected...first object related ECSS honor goes to you. eruheran |
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| Author: | Taiven Knight [ July 31st, 2010, 9:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
This is really great! Even though it's not a person, I can totally visualize it. |
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| Author: | Lady Terra [ July 31st, 2010, 9:49 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Corrin's Essence |
Wow, this is REALLY good! It seems I might have to make a map for my places too |
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