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| Author: | Kenton D. Long [ March 28th, 2010, 3:21 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Characters for the novel, Alterez: The Alliance | 
| These are some of my characters for my new novel, Alterez: The Alliance. Hope you like them!   Name: Vardair Age: 18 Species: Elvish Clothing: Elvish Royal Scout Armor Hair: Blonde, long (to the upper back) Eyes: Piercing blue Personality: Fast-paced thinking and always ready to laugh, but serious and calm when he wants to be Weapons: Elvish Long Bow, 2 Elvish Dual Bladed Swords Other: An A-rua Scout assigned to the A-rua Ambassador's convoy Name: Will Hurst Age: 17 Species: Human Clothing: Drasil Wizard's and Dragonkeeper's Garb Hair: Red with Black Streaks Eyes: Brown Personality: Curious and a watch-out attitude, but more often calm and watchful Weapons: Forge's Staff, Twohanded Dragon Sword Other: A Drasil Wizard and Dragonkeeper that was commanded to meet the Elvish Ambassador and to strengthen the convoy Name: Cladel Age: 17 Species: Dwarf Clothing: Coreda Sorceress Robe Hair: Red Eyes: Blue Personality: Secretive and Surprising Weapons: Sorceress Staff, Throwing Axes Other: A Coreda Sorceress who is commanded to meet the Elvish Ambassador and to strengthen the convoy Name: Sarin Age: 21 Species: Elvish Clothing: Royal Ambassador's Dress Hair: Brown, Long, Flowing Eyes: Leaf-green Personality: Get-to-the-point personality Weapons: Elvish Shot-Sword Other: The Royal A-rua Ambassador headed to Drasil and then to Coreda Name: Har'gan Age: 25 Species: Feran Clothing: Brown Britches Hair: Gray with a Red Stripe Eyes: Red Personality: Mischievous and Sneaky Weapons: Giant Broadsword Other: Har'gan is a Feran who, like his two twins, are bad at the beginning, but later switch sides. Name: Graear Age: 25 Species: Feran Clothing: Blue Britches Hair: Black With Red Stripe Eyes: Green Personality: Mischievous and Sneaky Weapons: Giant Broadsword Other: Graear is a Feran who, like his two twins, are bad at the beginning, but later switch sides. Name: Furhi Age: 25 Species: Feran Clothing: Red Britches Hair: Brown with Red Stripe Eyes: Blue Personality: Mischievous and Sneaky Weapons: Giant Broadsword Other: Furhi is a Feran who, like his two twins, are bad at the beginning, but later switch sides. A-rua, Drasil, and Coreda are countries that unite together to fight against the three other contries, the Empire of Sheol, the Empire of Lucifer, and the Empire of Abbadon. In the novel, Vardair, Will Hurst, and Cladel join together as a team to fight the three Empires and to help join the three countries... despite their differences. | |
| Author: | Kenton D. Long [ March 31st, 2010, 8:54 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Characters for the novel, Alterez: The Alliance | 
| Here is some more characters that I have created(...hope somone posts  ...) Name:Naltur Age:18 Species:Centuar Clothing:Mail Shirt with leather underneath Hair:Brown Fur; Black Hair,long Eyes:Blue Personality:Serious and sure of himself, always ready to do what ever it takes to get the job done Weapons:2 Heavy Longswords Other:A Guardian level centuar who was captured by Sheol Name:Erayle Age:18 Species:Centuar Clothing:Leather Shirt Hair:Brown Fur: Brown Hair, long Eyes:Blue Personality:Optimistic and ready to do what it takes to do a good job on something she has set her heart on doing Weapons:Centuar's Bow Other:The twin of Naltur who aquires help from Will Hurst to free Naltur Name:Athdyn Age:7 Species:Dragon Clothing:NaN Hair:NaN Scales: White with Blue Stripe Eyes:Green Flame Personality:has an I'm the biggest and toughest guy around attitude Weapons:Flamebreath, Icebreath, Poisonbreath, Spit, etc. Other:A miniurature dragon; Will Hurst is Athdyn's keeper Name:Ild'ir Age:7 Species:Dragon Clothing:NaN Hair:NaN Scales: Purple with Green Stripe Eyes:Blue Flame Personality:Optimistic, logical, and hilarious Weapons:Same as Athdyn Other:A miniature dragon; Twin of Athdyn; Will Hurst is Ild'ir's keeper Name:Rad'ril Age:5 Species:Dragon Clothing:NaN Hair:NaN Scales:Gold with Black Stripe Eyes:Flaming Red Personality:Confident and Powerful Weapons:Same as Athdyn, except more powerful Other:A Full size Dragon;Will Hurst is Rad'ril's keeper | |
| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ April 2nd, 2010, 12:37 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Characters for the novel, Alterez: The Alliance | 
| That took me a little while to read; you have a lot of characters! But they all seemed to be pretty well developed. Now you should try fractalling them with Sir Emeth's system! (I'll warn you ahead of time: it takes a LONG time to fractal even one character!)   I was wondering... which ones are your main characters? | |
| Author: | Kenton D. Long [ April 3rd, 2010, 7:30 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Characters for the novel, Alterez: The Alliance | 
| Will Hurst, Cladel, and Vardair are the main characters, but I'm using them all a lot in the novel. Fractal means...? | |
| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ April 4th, 2010, 7:41 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Characters for the novel, Alterez: The Alliance | 
| I'm not sure that I can explain fratalling well... I think Sir Emeth has something about it on his blog. And there's a post on character fractalling in the character development forum!   | |
| Author: | Whythawye [ May 21st, 2010, 4:02 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Characters for the novel, Alterez: The Alliance | 
| As she said, there are several places on the forum where we talk about fractalling. There is a thread in this room here called Our Deep Character Fractalling System. Check that out. Fractalling is, in essence, taking a simple idea and iteratively making it more complex by small, repeated actions. It makes thinking through large and complex things much easier. | |
| Author: | Lady Terra [ May 21st, 2010, 7:02 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Characters for the novel, Alterez: The Alliance | 
| Wow, it must have taken you a while to come up with all these characters! Good job! It took me quite a while to read them all   | |
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