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 Post subject: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 24th, 2011, 11:27 pm 
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:twisted: MWAH HAHA!!!!! NONE SHALL ESCAPE MY CHALLENGE!!!!

All who enter this thread must give me a short story (maybe a couple of sentences) that only has questions! And remember, it has to make sense! GO FORTH AND ACCEPT THIS MY PRISONERS!!!! :twisted:

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 24th, 2011, 11:49 pm 
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Where? -A Short Story

Where am I? I wonder, where I am?

What was that noise? Who made that noise? Is that the person who Put me here? Is that the person who hurt me? Is that why I am still hurting? Is he the one who made me forget? Is he the one who will keep me here?

I wonder if I'll get out of here. I wonder why I feel so weak? Did he make me weak? Am I still moving?

Is this what it's like to die...?


The End

[EDIT] Okay, I forgot to put all question marks, :P my mistake. Sorry.

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 12:47 am 
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This sounds like fun, Green! *Is good and makes something up on the spot*

Why- Short Story wrote:
Why?

Why does those lights flash? Why are they red and blue? Why not green, or purple? Why are they those harsh colors, tainting the night sky with their glow?

Why to they snap mental bracelets on my wrists? Why are they keeping my hands from moving? Why do they grab me roughly and shove me in the back of their car? Why are they so rough?

Why do they stuff me in a cell? Why do these bars contain me? Why do they give me such small amounts of food? Why, do they expect me to live here?

What are they saying? Why are their words mere gibberish? Why can't I understand them? Why can't I know why they put me here?

What did I do wrong? Why, do they think I killed that man?

Why?


Oh, and yours was good, MF! :cool:

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 12:53 am 
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Whoa, these are cool! Thank you, MadeFree and Azlyn, for understanding and demonstrating the challenge.
I must try one.

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 1:11 am 
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Why is this Green Mist enveloping me? Why do I suddenly feel the urge to write a story completely made up of questions? May I have a pen to immortalize this inspiration? Or must I scratch it into the dust of the ground with my finger? If I do, will it last more than a moment? Or will the wind, or the feet of another traveler wipe out its memory?

Will anything I compose today be remembered tomorrow?

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 1:13 am 
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Nice challenge, Misty! And my little story there actually had some depth once I began to write it :) I thought I would just ramble randomly, but with a little editing it actually became substantive. I should write more poems/very short stories.

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 2:45 am 
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Who are you?... What do you mean I don't remember?... How can you say that?! Can't you see I'm fine?... What do you mean they had me?... They what!? You can't be serious?... Trust you? Why would I trust you? How do I know you didn't it?... I did it? How could I have done it?... What are you saying?... But, I-I would never do that, can't you see? How can you say I'm like that?... Why would I ever betray my friends?! How can you even be my friend? How do I even know I have any friends? What kind of friend would claim I killed an entire world?!... You expect me to believe you?... Just give a girl some breathing space, okay? Do you think I would do something like that?... Oh, so it doesn't matter what either of us think?... You know what? Why don't you just go find yourself some new friends?... What do you mean no one's left?... You, you really meant it when you said I destroyed the entire world?... But, how could I?... I, I'm just, what? What am I?... WHAT AM I?!...

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 2:07 pm 
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MadeFree92 wrote:
Where? -A Short Story

Where am I? I wonder, where I am?

What was that noise? Who made that noise? Is that the person who Put me here? Is that the person who hurt me? Is that why I am still hurting? Is he the one who made me forget? Is he the one who will keep me here?

I wonder if I'll get out of here. I wonder why I feel so weak. Did he make me weak? Am I still moving?

Is this what it's like to die...?


The End


Good story, except not every sentence is a question. ;) And Vili, yours was great too! Also yours Heaven. :)

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"Everything that is now proven, was once only imagined." - William Blake

"Anyone who has never made a mistake, has never tried anything new."

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 6:03 pm 
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Every sentence was a question; there just wasn't a question mark at the end, but it reads as a question I think.


I love all these, they're all great. Nice challenge, Misty! Keep 'em coming, guys!

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A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

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 Post subject: Re: All Questions!
PostPosted: December 25th, 2011, 10:40 pm 
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Yours is cool, Villise. :cool:
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How do I know you didn't it?
Did you mean "How do I know you didn't do it"?

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