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PostPosted: March 26th, 2010, 2:03 pm 
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Feran
Description: Half Giant Wolf; Half Satyr
Size: 10' normal; 15' for high-ranking ones
Face: Wolf or Human head with horns
Body: Bulky; Strong
Legs: Bulky; Powerful
Fur: Black, Tan, Gray, or Red Fur; Stripe from head to tip of tail (color depends on the Feran's loyalty)

Specialties: 1. Can jump 50' high and 100' forward
2. Walks upright
3. Can use magic and talk like any human

One of the oldest species of Mixbreed in all of Alcratez, the Feran is one of the most dangerous and intelligent creatures next to only humans, elves, and human-like species.

The Feran are omnivores, but they mostly eat meat. They will usually hunt humans only two days out of the month and eat practically any other creature any other day. Feran only eat plants when starved or when sick.

Though most Feran are treacherous and cunning, some will side with the Humans and Elves, ultimately cutting themselves off from the major Feran population.


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 Post subject: Re: Wolsatyr to Feran
PostPosted: March 26th, 2010, 8:55 pm 
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I got some good advice from a friend and I changed Wolsatyr to Feran! :)

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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: March 26th, 2010, 9:32 pm 
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So they have wolf legs, a human body, and a human or wolf head? So, it can either be saytrish or minotaurish? Do they have a religion or are the closer to beast in that sense? Is there any way to change the stripe color to fool the enemy? And does the stripe change color instantly if it changes alliances?

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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: March 27th, 2010, 9:32 pm 
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Griffin wrote:
So they have wolf legs, a human body, and a human or wolf head? So, it can either be saytrish or minotaurish? Do they have a religion or are the closer to beast in that sense? Is there any way to change the stripe color to fool the enemy? And does the stripe change color instantly if it changes alliances?


The legs are more on the satyr jumpy side, but have the wolf's fur. The body is human shaped but again covered in wolf's fur. The head part is correct. The Feran don't have a belief system except the usual serve self kind of attitude. The stripe will change color only when the Feran truly changes its loyalties, so you can't fake it.

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Cool name! ;)

Though seriously I like these boys, are they your bad guys?


In my novel, I use three Feran, who, at the beginning, are evil and later switch sides. They literally turn against their whole race...but Feran have the Loner personality that they get from the Giant Wolf because the wolf is so strong it would take at least ten humans to take one down... :evil:

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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: March 28th, 2010, 7:43 am 
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They're awesome! :evil:

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
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"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: March 30th, 2010, 1:37 pm 
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The legs are more on the satyr jumpy side, but have the wolf's fur.


Wait, does that mean they have hoofs or paws? (Is it hoofs or hooves or can it be either?)

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
-Gandalf

"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Current projects:
Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: March 30th, 2010, 6:37 pm 
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Griffin wrote:
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The legs are more on the satyr jumpy side, but have the wolf's fur.


Wait, does that mean they have hoofs or paws? (Is it hoofs or hooves or can it be either?)
Hoofs... I think...

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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: March 31st, 2010, 7:30 pm 
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Wait, it's spelled hoofs or they have hoofs, or both?

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
-Gandalf

"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Current projects:
Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: March 31st, 2010, 8:18 pm 
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BOTH!!! :evil: Just joking! LOL!!!

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 Post subject: Re: Feran
PostPosted: April 2nd, 2010, 8:55 am 
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OKAY! :evil: Just joking! LOL!


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