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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ October 31st, 2011, 3:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Murder: Emotions. |
As many of you know I am writing an historical novel. I'm not planning on stopping at one, I want to make it into a series all based in the Elizabethan Era (Depending on how I do with the first one of course How do you play on the feelings of your reader when you have killed a person they do not like? How can you make them feel sorry for him? I don't want him to be married as he was having an affair with a married woman, so he has to be single. My ideas were a child, you see; someone who he left behind who needed him, but since he isn't married I veer away from that idea. I decided to come here for ideas to see what you all think; yes, I promise to post this on HWHF when it opens, but it's too long to wait for me to post it. |
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| Author: | Aldara [ November 1st, 2011, 10:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Murder: Emotions. |
I shall return to reply! Just pm me if I don't do it soon. I'm very interested, but unfortuanately, I'm being called away from the computer. I'll come back. |
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| Author: | Aleena Mimetes [ November 2nd, 2011, 10:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Murder: Emotions. |
Well, first, I would like to establish that the Elizabethan era is my favorite of all favorites (and yes I have a few). You mentioned leaving a child behind, but you are don't want it to be a birth child. The child could simply be a nephew, (or something) that shows up once or twice before and endears himself to the audience, but makes it known that he is dependent on his uncle. He could need his uncle's funds to realize his dreams of being something, or even to meet basic needs. Just some ideas. Aleena |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ November 3rd, 2011, 1:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Murder: Emotions. |
That is a good suggestion, Aleena, thank you. I'll be sure to bob you a PM if you forget, Aldara. |
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| Author: | Aldara [ February 13th, 2012, 8:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Murder: Emotions. |
*has been poked* If you want the readers to feel sorry for the man that they don't like who has died, you need to make him likeable. Give him a redeeming quality. However, if all you want is that they are sorry he died, and not necessarily sorry for him, you have more options. a)Take a look at the viewpoint of the woman he's having an affair with. That's hard, because obviously they feel... something... for one another, but she's married, so... yeah. b)Put in some of the little details that make the reader aware that he is missed. He's a Queen's Advisor, there's got to be something. Say 'if Advisor was here, he might have some ideas about how to get out of this mess' or something of that sort. 'If Advisor were here we would still be connected to this noble house...' I don't know the plot, so I can't be too specific, but try that. c) Show a scene from something he supported. Maybe he was a hated character but he loved the arts and funded a museum. So have a scene where his museum is shown as suffering because of his death. d) Have someone who is reliant on him, like Aleena mentioned. It doesn't have to be a child -maybe it's his mother. |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ February 17th, 2012, 11:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Murder: Emotions. |
Those are really helpful, Aldara. Thank you so much! |
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