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| Author: | Aleena Mimetes [ October 18th, 2011, 11:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | My first essence... |
This is my first shot at this so please help... I am thinking of doing Frodo from Lord of The Rings... Eyes: Piercing, like a knights dagger... Hair: Black like a raven's breast... Mouth:Tight, like a pulled bow string... Stature: Bent like an old man yet proud like a king... Spirit: Adventurous like a raging river... Soul: Strong and unyielding like a mighty oak... Help please...! I am in desperate need of your services! |
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| Author: | Captain Nemo Marlene [ October 19th, 2011, 12:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first essence... |
This is a great start, Alina!  You get the idea of using metaphors, which is really good. The next step is to work on sub-categories. I have a post about writing a firstX map in the main Essence area if you want to take a look at it. Also, looking at others' maps will help a lot too. |
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| Author: | Aleena Mimetes [ October 19th, 2011, 6:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first essence... |
Thanks a lot! I looked at yours right after I posted this, and saw I needed some sub-categories... |
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