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Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ March 3rd, 2010, 11:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Rosamund/Raven's essence
Rosamund/Raven
…Body {Eyes…… [Color (Obsidian)
…………………………………… (Pools of water at night)]
…………………….... [Depth (Night sky)
……………………………………. (Hopeful child)
…………………………………… (Deep pools of water in a cave)]
……………………… [Sparkle (Newly cut diamonds)
……………………………………. (Stars in the night sky)]}
……… {Smile………………… (Fleeting glimpses of sun behind a cloud)
………………………………..... (Sun reflecting off snow)]}
...... {Hair...... [Color (Midnight sky)
............................... (Raven's feathers)]
.................... [Texture (Shining silk)
................................ (Ocean storm)
................................ (Swinging branches of a weeping willow)]
.......{Face.................(Smoothly polished ivory)
................................(Carefully carved statue)
……… {Motion... [Grace (Cats playing)
…………………………………… (Wind chimes)
.................... [Strength (An untested colt)
……………………………………… (A sapling in the wind)]
………………………. [Speed (A young deer)]}
…….. {Beauty……………... (A misty day)
……………………………………. (A sunrise)
…………………………………... (A rainbow)
……………………………………. (A cloudless sky)]}

…Spirit {………… [Quality (Hidden treasure)]
……………………… [Aspects (A newly built structure)]
……………………… [Fear (A young animal that has not learned about danger)]
……………………… [Loyalty (A faithful friend)]}

…Mind {………………… [Clarity (A slightly murky stream)]
…………………………….. [Depth (A lightless underwater cave)
………………………………………... (A twisting maze)]
…………………………….. [Knowledge (An innocent child)
………………………………….............. (A beginner musician)
………………………………….............. (A new martial artist)]}

…Soul {………………… [Depth (A deep well)
………………………………………… (Space)
………………………………………… (Trees in the wind)]
……………………………. [Purity (A new house)
………………………………………… (New snow)]
…………………………… [Longing (A child needing love someone to love her)]}


Though she's not a bad character, when I think of her in terms of colour, I think of black.
Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ March 7th, 2010, 6:11 pm ]
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True, if you consider her essence, her colour is white. My associating black with her is completely illogical. :D
Author:  Whythawye [ March 8th, 2010, 4:04 am ]
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Raven of the Wood wrote:
True, if you consider her essence, her colour is white. My associating black with her is completely illogical. :D


If you associate black with her, then that is part of her essence. But you might need ECSS++ to show that. :)
Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ March 8th, 2010, 11:24 am ]
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Sir Emeth Mimetes wrote:
Raven of the Wood wrote:
True, if you consider her essence, her colour is white. My associating black with her is completely illogical. :D


If you associate black with her, then that is part of her essence. But you might need ECSS++ to show that. :)


What is ECSS++?

I was thinking about it some more, and I might associate black with her because of her mask. When I think of masks, I think black.
Author:  Whythawye [ March 8th, 2010, 12:41 pm ]
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Raven of the Wood wrote:
What is ECSS++?

I was thinking about it some more, and I might associate black with her because of her mask. When I think of masks, I think black.


ECSS++ is the advanced, extended version of ECSSbasic, which is what you all are using right now. There is a lot more to it. :)
Author:  Whythawye [ March 8th, 2010, 2:19 pm ]
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Inesdar wrote:
What on earth does programming have to do with essences, Jay?


The syntax of essence is based off of various markup and programming languages. But ECSS++ is an advanced essence mapping system, with many added features and capabilities.
Author:  Seer of Endor [ March 8th, 2010, 2:26 pm ]
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Which in English means it's probably twice if not thrice as confusing ;)
Author:  Mama Raven Mimetes [ March 8th, 2010, 2:39 pm ]
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LOL@ Jordan!

How long have you known Jay?
Sounds like you have him pegged.
*grin*

~Raven
Author:  Seer of Endor [ March 8th, 2010, 2:55 pm ]
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White Raven wrote:
LOL@ Jordan!

How long have you known Jay?
Sounds like you have him pegged.
*grin*
Will be 4 weeks tomorrow that I've been on the forum, so I've known him about 3 1/2 weeks or so :D
Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ November 21st, 2010, 6:19 pm ]
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I've updated the essence a bit, because of the changes that have occurred as I wrote her story. Here's the new one!

Rosamund/Raven
…Body {Eyes…… [Color (Obsidian)
…………………………………… (Pools of water at night)]
…………………….... [Depth (Night sky)
……………………………………. (Hopeful child)
…………………………………… (Deep pools of water in a cave)]
……………………… [Sparkle (Newly cut diamonds)
……………………………………. (Stars in the night sky)]}
……… {Smile………………… (Fleeting glimpses of sun behind a cloud)
………………………………..... (Sun reflecting off snow)]}
...... {Hair...... [Color (Midnight sky)
............................... (Raven's feathers)]
.................... [Texture (Shining silk)
................................ (Ocean storm)
................................ (Swinging branches of a weeping willow)]
.......{Face.................(Smoothly polished ivory)
................................(Carefully carved statue)
……… {Motion... [Grace (Cats playing)
…………………………………… (Wind chimes)
.................... [Strength (An untested colt)
……………………………………… (A sapling in the wind)]
………………………. [Speed (A young deer)]}
…….. {Beauty……………... (A misty day)
……………………………………. (A sunrise)
…………………………………... (A rainbow)
……………………………………. (A cloudless sky)]}

…Spirit {………… [Quality (Hidden treasure)]
……………………… [Aspects (A new, but poorly built structure)]
……………………… [Fear (A wounded doe)]
……………………… [Loyalty (A faithful friend)]
.................... [Anger (A she-bear separated from her cubs
...............................(A convicted murderer intent on revenge)
...............................(A sudden wind storm)]}

…Mind {…………………[Clarity (A slightly murky stream)]
……………………………..[Depth (A lightless underwater cave)
………………………………………... (A twisting maze)]
……………………………..[Knowledge (An innocent child)
………………………………….............. (A beginner musician)
………………………………….............. (A new martial artist)]}

…Soul {………………… [Depth (A deep well)
………………………………………… (Space)
………………………………………… (Trees in the wind)]
……………………………. [Purity (A house broken by a tornado)]
……………………………. [Longing (A child needing love someone to love her)]}
Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ November 28th, 2010, 1:01 am ]
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Looks good, Raven. Just out of curiosity--are you ever going to post more on this story? I really liked it when I read it. Hopefully the fact that there's a new essence means that you're writing more. =D

eruheran
Author:  Reiyen [ November 28th, 2010, 11:19 pm ]
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Now I see the power of essence mapping, even if this is the "basic level." I feel I know this character, though I have never read any portion of this story, yet.
Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ November 29th, 2010, 4:56 am ]
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Here you go--you must read this story (I'll just do some advertising for Raven since I really like her story):

viewtopic.php?f=19&t=294

eruheran
Author:  Kiev Shawn [ November 29th, 2010, 5:54 pm ]
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Aha! I have been looking for that story, and I will read it soon. Thank you, Eruheran. :)
Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ December 3rd, 2010, 1:56 pm ]
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eruheran wrote:
Looks good, Raven. Just out of curiosity--are you ever going to post more on this story? I really liked it when I read it.


I'm so sorry, Eruheran. I told you I'd put more on the HWRF, did I? :( Anyway, the complete first draft is now posted there (or it will be if Google Docs cooperates). I will not be posting any of the second draft, but if anyone wants to read it as I write it, they can PM me, and I'll send it to them at my discretion. The only catch is you have to do a small critique on it. :D

Reiyen wrote:
Now I see the power of essence mapping, even if this is the "basic level." I feel I know this character, though I have never read any portion of this story, yet.


Oh, good! Thanks!
Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ December 3rd, 2010, 5:49 pm ]
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I have it all posted now!
Author:  Rachel Newhouse [ December 3rd, 2010, 10:45 pm ]
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Pretty! I think black (or rather, a deep blue) fits her. Black is not always wicked - it is sophisticated, deep, and rich. I get the impression of a lovely, graceful, and faithful woman - but one that is, perhaps, naive or unstable.
Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ December 4th, 2010, 6:24 pm ]
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Philadelphia wrote:
Pretty! I think black (or rather, a deep blue) fits her. Black is not always wicked - it is sophisticated, deep, and rich.


Hmmm. I'm actually thinking a combination of black and red now, but perhaps I need a higher level to show that, like Jay said.

Philadelphia wrote:
I get the impression of a lovely, graceful, and faithful woman - but one that is, perhaps, naive or unstable.


Good, Philli! Just add angry and bitter to that, and you've got it!
Author:  Lady Shanai-Irisis [ February 16th, 2011, 10:40 pm ]
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Hey, Raven!

I must say.... I love the eyes. They sound so beautiful! Simply captivating!
Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ February 18th, 2011, 1:32 pm ]
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Thank you, Shanai.

It made my day yesterday to come on here and see that you'd commented on all my essence maps. :D
Author:  Lady Shanai-Irisis [ February 18th, 2011, 10:13 pm ]
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It made my day to read through them! ;) You guys have inspired me to do another one, so I am! And it will hopefully be out soon! :D
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