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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ February 21st, 2010, 5:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Ciarra's Essence |
Here's an essence I did for a new character, Ciarra: Mind...{Turmoil...[......(A thunderstorm just beginning) ..............................(An abused child)]} .........{Clarity....[......(A polluted river: once it was clear, but now it is dirty and brown.)]} .........{Depth.....[......(A spring) ...............................(A really good book: there is always something new to discover)]} .........{Thoughts..[Despair...(Winter at Valley Forge) ...............................(A day without sunshine)] .......................[Hope...(The book of Isaiah) ...............................(The chirping of birds in the morning) ...............................(A rainbow against dark clouds)]} Soul...{Enduring...[.....(The promise of a true friend) ..............................(The faith of Job)]} ........{Light........[.....(Music played flawlessly) ..............................(Motherly compassion and kindness) ..............................(A bright candle in a dark room)]} ........{Distress....[.....(A dying flame) ..............................(Fire without oxygen)]} Spirit...{Beauty.....[Kindness...(A prayer for an enemy) ........................[Gentleness..(Moonlight Sonata)]} .........{Fear.......[.......(Hiding in the shadows) ................................(Darkness closing in around her)] Body...{Eyes.......[Color..(A brewing thunderstorm) ..................................(Silvery Grey)] ........................[Sadness...(Long suffering) .......................................(Years of abuse) ........................[Caution...(Remembrance)] ........................[Depth.....(A bottomless pit) ......................................(The horizon: it seems close, but you can never get there)]} ..........{Hair.......[Color...(A raven) ..................................(The midnight sky)] ..........{Motion...[Fluidity...(A mountain stream)] .......................[Speed....(An Arabian horse)] What do y'all think? |
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| Author: | Whythawye [ February 22nd, 2010, 11:55 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
I really like all the Biblical references you did. It really gives a lot of depth to it! |
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| Author: | Mama Raven Mimetes [ February 22nd, 2010, 11:56 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
Great job Abby! I like the thunderstorm references. Thunderstorms are one of my favorites in God's creation. (If I didn't have a full time job as a mom of four I'd be a storm chaser!) I think this is my favorite line: Spirit...{Beauty.....[Kindness...(A prayer for an enemy) THAT'S a beautiful spirit! I also think the hope of the chirping birds in the morning is picturesque. She sounds like such a mixture of hope and despair. Very conflicted. but great for a main character! ~Raven |
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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ February 23rd, 2010, 4:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
Thanks everyone! A mixture of hope and despair is what is was going for, White Raven! It does make an interesting character. |
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| Author: | Lord Kieren Mimetes [ February 26th, 2010, 11:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
I love it! |
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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ February 26th, 2010, 11:39 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
Thanks! How is Griffin's essence coming along? |
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| Author: | Lord Kieren Mimetes [ February 27th, 2010, 1:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
It's coming... |
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| Author: | Lady Eruwaedhiel [ February 27th, 2010, 2:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
Slowly but surely, eh, Griffin? |
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| Author: | Lord Kieren Mimetes [ March 18th, 2010, 7:38 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ciarra's Essence |
I think it is finished now (even though it took a while). I need to post it. |
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