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If you don't mind doin a little fixin work of my own.....
Seth Misaki Born with the power to control lightning, and developing the cunning and strength of a wolf, Seth is naturally an astounding fighter. Seth is also believed to have been born with a wolf spirit inside him, as his eyes tend to glow a distinctive yellow color whilst in combat. He travels around with his younger brother Felix, who isn't as smart as his elder brother, but is just as capable a fighter. He met "Nami" while traveling to work with Gabe-sun. He instantly fell in love with her and traveled with her and the others to the end of the world. His undying love for her can be exploited as a weakness by enemies, but this can also backfire and end up a devastating event for all considered his foes.

Yeah kinda ditched the whole 5 Tailed Wolf thing a while back...... just thought I'd have input

Author:	Kanari Moon-sun [ September 1st, 2011, 5:39 pm ]
Post subject:	Character Development/Intro to Bondage
Character Introduction and Development to my story called Bondage. Please excuse my Grammar, spelling and such...it is something I need to work on. If you wish to look at the plot and current drafts, click both links in my signature. Just so you know the Plot link and this thread has a bit of spoilers. Main Character(s) I will give a quick and basic biography. Kanari Moon-sun: Her birth name is Nani Moon-sun. She was born as the heir to the Moon-sunu throne was born an Angel...a "Gift from God". Her mother died during her birth and her father was unknown. She was found as a lost child when her race was massacred. During her childhood, she was known as Nami Ninya to protect her identity. After she defeated Kanari Yatsu during her travel to the end of the world, she took adopt his name as a sign of peace between the two. Kanari Yatsu: He was a Sun-jin who was racist against the Moon-sunu race. He sought the power of immortality, slaying those in his path and later massacred the Moon-sunu race. After discovering that his son married a Moon-sunu princess and had a child, he sought after the young child, dreading that he was related to a Moon-sun. Yukaru Sun-jin He was born as heir to the Sun-jini throne. The Sun-jinis were known to have demons sealed into their children, but this wasn't practiced until they broke away from the Moon-sunus. He had later discover that he was born a demon, a pure blooded demon. When his parents discovered that rebels inside their race were going to over take the royal throne, they hid the young boy in another county. When travelling his way back home, he discovered that all trace of his homeland had disappeared. He was automatically rejected by the world and treated like a monster. He met "Nami" during his escape from his torturers. He grew a liking to her and became her guardian. He also neede her because he was dying. Vincent Known as the invisible man because of his unknown history, he travels as a mercenary. Recently given the job to assasin "Nami", he spends his time with his Hawk, Siren, and buying expensive roses for reasons unknown. With his first encounter with "Nami", he realized that she resembled someone he loved a long time ago. He did some research and found out that the "Gift of God" may just be a spirit... Seth Misaki Born with the power to control lightning, and developing the cunning and strength of a wolf, Seth is naturally an astounding fighter. Seth is also believed to have been born with a wolf spirit inside him, as his eyes tend to glow a distinctive yellow color whilst in combat. He travels around with his younger brother Felix, who isn't as smart as his elder brother, but is just as capable a fighter. He met "Nami" while traveling to work with Gabe-sun. He instantly fell in love with her and traveled with her and the others to the end of the world. His undying love for her can be exploited as a weakness by enemies, but he feels threatened by Vincent, "Namis" lover. Edithy III Kon The oldest adopted brother of "Nami". He was born as the heir to the Fire race. As "Nami's" brother, he feels very responsible for her and admits to her that he has an infatuation. Realizing that she is captured by another man, he painfully lets her go. He was born as a "Fire Demon" Pritan Keen The middle child of five brothers and 1 sister, he was born as an "Air Demon". When growing up, he felt that he was different and kept quiet. He finds out through his mother, that he has three distinct race traits that boil inside his blood. When he met "Nami" he finally discovered who he was. Kyuki Da-Chao Born as the "Lightning Demon", Kyuki was born with a disorder: he could not feel physical or emotional pain. On growing up, his oldest sister dies during war, his mother dies during the birth of his younger sister, Srei-Peu, and his father was sacrificed. When he met "Nami", she healed him of his disorder and asked him to join her journey. He agreed to go in order to protect Oola Keen, Omri and Pritans sister, which he loved. Secondary Character(s) These characters need a little bit of biography. Kranomaru Yatsu: Kanari and Juns father. Zazu Aero: Kanari Moon-suns royal Guardian. Kai Moon-sun: Second heir to the Moon-sun throne and Kanari Moon-suns uncle. Ken-Kai Uzami: Kai Moon-suns royal Guardian. Srei-Peu Da-Chao Kyuki's sister. Gabe-sun Jursanjo: Friend of Kanari Moon-sun and co-worker of Seth Misaki. Jun Yatsu: Kanari Moon-suns sister. Felix Misaki Seth Misaki's brother. Zaku Zamuhanu: Kanari Moon-suns adopted brother and real brother to Inari Zamuhanu. Inari Zamuhanu: Kanari Moon-suns adopted brother and real brother to Zaku Zamuhanu. Drake Keen: Kadaj, Suburo, Hojo, Pritan, Omri and Oola's father. Husband to Sunny Ovanni. Omri Keen: Younger brother of Pritan Keen. Unmei Inazuma: Guardian of Raikou and Denkou Hou. Also the Gate-keeper of the Lightning tower that powers the world. Kadaj Keen: Oldest brother of Pritan Keen, Omri Keen and Ooal Ovanni. He was known for saving "Nami" in tough circumstances. It was rumored that he once admired the mother of "Nami". Others: The characters do not need a biography. They can be derived from the secondaries, the main characters or have small functions. Sunny Ovanni: Wife to Drake Keen. Oola Ovanni: Daughter of Drake Keen and Sunny Ovanni. Younger sister of the Keen brothers. Chan-rithy Jursanjo: Younger sister of Gabe-sun. Sheena Uzami: Younger sister of Ken-Kai Uzami. Raikou Hou: Second Heir to the Lightning throne and Denkou's twin sister. Mainly known as "Cessenei" Denkou Hou: First Heir to the Lightning throne and Raikou's twin brother. This topic will be edited as need.

Author:	Riniel Jasmina [ September 1st, 2011, 5:47 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Character Development/Intro to Bondage
Very nice. Character lists always get me excited.

Author:	Kanari Moon-sun [ September 1st, 2011, 5:57 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Character Development/Intro to Bondage
Riniel Jasmina wrote: Very nice. Character lists always get me excited. You stalking me? Lolz! Oh and I made a new name for your character because I forgot it! It is the second to last name in the secondaries....it means Lightning Destiny

Author:	Riniel Jasmina [ September 1st, 2011, 6:02 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Character Development/Intro to Bondage
Kanari Moon-sun wrote: Riniel Jasmina wrote: Very nice. Character lists always get me excited. You stalking me? Lolz! Oh and I made a new name for your character because I forgot it! It is the second to last name in the secondaries....it means Lightning Destiny No, I keep up on all that which is recently posted. I just know your story more than most. I like the name.

Author:	Kanari Moon-sun [ September 1st, 2011, 6:08 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Character Development/Intro to Bondage
Aww thanks! I tried not to add too many characters. Its crazy! For each individual I have partners for them, enemies for them, biographies about them, family lines for them...this is all crammed into my brain.

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Author:	Eclipse Overdrive [ September 7th, 2011, 12:12 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Character Development/Intro to Bondage
If you don't mind doin a little fixin work of my own..... Seth Misaki Born with the power to control lightning, and developing the cunning and strength of a wolf, Seth is naturally an astounding fighter. Seth is also believed to have been born with a wolf spirit inside him, as his eyes tend to glow a distinctive yellow color whilst in combat. He travels around with his younger brother Felix, who isn't as smart as his elder brother, but is just as capable a fighter. He met "Nami" while traveling to work with Gabe-sun. He instantly fell in love with her and traveled with her and the others to the end of the world. His undying love for her can be exploited as a weakness by enemies, but this can also backfire and end up a devastating event for all considered his foes. Yeah kinda ditched the whole 5 Tailed Wolf thing a while back...... just thought I'd have input

Author:	Kanari Moon-sun [ September 7th, 2011, 12:55 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Character Development/Intro to Bondage
Eclipse Overdrive wrote: If you don't mind doin a little fixin work of my own..... Seth Misaki Born with the power to control lightning, and developing the cunning and strength of a wolf, Seth is naturally an astounding fighter. Seth is also believed to have been born with a wolf spirit inside him, as his eyes tend to glow a distinctive yellow color whilst in combat. He travels around with his younger brother Felix, who isn't as smart as his elder brother, but is just as capable a fighter. He met "Nami" while traveling to work with Gabe-sun. He instantly fell in love with her and traveled with her and the others to the end of the world. His undying love for her can be exploited as a weakness by enemies, but this can also backfire and end up a devastating event for all considered his foes. Yeah kinda ditched the whole 5 Tailed Wolf thing a while back...... just thought I'd have input Yays you got an account! Hugz I added your information to the plot.

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