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Author:  Captain Nemo Marlene [ August 28th, 2011, 8:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop

Yes, I realize that this is a historical fiction character, but I completed this map for Seer's essence map challenge. I figured that a character from any genre of fiction would work. If you would rather me not post a historical fiction character and create another map of a fantasy character, however, I can. :D

I would also like to say that some of this is my impression of Janet. Some parts of Janet were not described directly, but I am trying to stay accurate to the book in what the author did describe.

Finally, I am still pretty new at essence mapping, so please feel free to rip this map apart and give me suggestions. One thing I noticed myself was I tend to use animals a lot, so could you try to give me some alternatives? ;) :D

Janet:

Body:
 Eyes:
  Depth: child fascinated by life, deer caught in headlights, young owl, dependent young, dog playing tug-of-war
  Sparkle: Stars in a dark night, reflected candlelight, skipping dancer
  Smile: quaking Jell-O, soft meniscus, wavering arch, wooden beam
 Hair:
  Color: raven feathers, starless eclipse
  Texture: wisps of threads, strings soft and fluffed by the wind
  Motion: wind sock in the breeze, tree limbs playing with the wind, soft sweeping broom, plumb line in still air
 Face:
  Color: light clay, pear, parchment
  Depth: wisdom, stone, far away, intertwined, a donkey
  Texture: wrinkled paper, a baby, ill-lain sheets on a soft, welcoming bed
  Motion: frozen in time, surge of energy, quickly drained pipe, house alarm
 Motion:
  Grace: a panther, an ostrich, a kitten, a donkey
  Strength: an offended kitten, a cylinder, a punch against chainmail
  Speed: a slinking cat, a running bird

Spirit:
 Quality: pure silk, a champagne diamond
 Loyalty: the constant four seasons, the reoccurring moon phases
 Pride: a bird with a newly found gem, several scratches soon healed and strong
 Anger: clenched teeth, a sore eased by medicine
 Fear: an apprehensive kitten, a mouse constantly looking for shelter, a strong tower with shaking walls
 Strength: a strong roman pillar

Mind:
 Clarity: a river feeding into the ocean, focused energy, buzzing sounds
 Depth: experience, child play, an owl,
 Knowledge: limited resources, primitive, wide
 Soul: open fields, mountaintop view
 Logic: playful, values of a child, calm leader

Soul:
 Depth: a well becoming built, a sponge
 Passion: playful thoughts, spontaneous values, life-long principles
 Strength: an army never to surrender, firm ground

The map format/categories were mostly from Raven of the Wood's essence map.

Do we have a post somewhere that has every category/subcategory posted so we can go there and get them instead of from other peoples posts? I feel like I may be missing some, and perhaps am not even formatting this correctly.

Author:  Cadenza [ August 29th, 2011, 2:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop

I love love that book, and I love Janet! Good job on the essence map; I especially like the Anger metaphors.
Phylis

Author:  Seer of Endor [ November 4th, 2011, 4:48 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop

Sorry it took me so long to notice this, Captain Nemo. :blush: It looks really good. :D

Author:  Tsahraf ChahsidMimetes [ January 11th, 2012, 5:40 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop

I like this, good job Captain Nemo!

I do not know who Janet is, but these are my favorite parts:

Body:
 Eyes:
  Depth: deer caught in headlights, dependent young, dog playing tug-of-war
  Smile: quaking Jell-O (I suppose you mean gel?), soft meniscus
 Hair:
  Color: starless eclipse
  Texture: wisps of threads, strings soft and fluffed by the wind
  Motion: soft sweeping broom, plumb line in still air
 Face:
  Depth: far away, intertwined, a donkey
  Texture: a baby, ill-lain sheets on a soft, welcoming bed
  Motion: frozen in time, quickly drained pipe
 Motion:
  Grace: a kitten, a donkey
  Strength: an offended kitten, a cylinder, a punch against chainmail

Spirit:
 Quality: pure silk, a champagne diamond
 Pride: a bird with a newly found gem, several scratches soon healed and strong
 Anger: clenched teeth, a sore eased by medicine

And my especially favorite parts:

Body:
 Eyes:
  Depth: deer caught in headlights, dependent young, dog playing tug-of-war
 Hair:
  Color: starless eclipse
  Motion: plumb line in still air
 Face:
  Texture: a baby, ill-lain sheets on a soft, welcoming bed
  Motion: frozen in time, quickly drained pipe
 Motion:
  Strength: an offended kitten, a cylinder, a punch against chainmail

Spirit:
 Quality: pure silk, a champagne diamond

My favorite of all:

 Hair:
  Motion: plumb line in still air

My favorite metaphore without regard for its application:

quickly drained pipe

Is Janet some one who is old, but seems very young, younger than twenty years? That is the concrete impression I had from the map.

Author:  Sienna North [ January 16th, 2012, 7:49 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop

Tsahraf wrote:
Is Janet some one who is old, but seems very young, younger than twenty years? That is the concrete impression I had from the map.


From my recollection, she's about twelve or so in this story.

And, Cap'n, this is beautiful! I loved the story, and I think you did a great job capturing Janet's essence even from the rather limited description in the book. Your metaphors in particular were extremely striking. Makes me want to try one myself!

Author:  Captain Nemo Marlene [ January 17th, 2012, 10:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop

Thanks, guys!

Yes, Janet is very young.

Author:  Tsahraf ChahsidMimetes [ January 17th, 2012, 2:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop

~Evenstar~ wrote:
Makes me want to try one myself!

Do! I want to see it.

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