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| Author: | Captain Nemo Marlene [ August 28th, 2011, 8:47 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop | 
| Yes, I realize that this is a historical fiction character, but I completed this map for Seer's essence map challenge. I figured that a character from any genre of fiction would work. If you would rather me not post a historical fiction character and create another map of a fantasy character, however, I can.  I would also like to say that some of this is my impression of Janet. Some parts of Janet were not described directly, but I am trying to stay accurate to the book in what the author did describe. Finally, I am still pretty new at essence mapping, so please feel free to rip this map apart and give me suggestions. One thing I noticed myself was I tend to use animals a lot, so could you try to give me some alternatives?    Janet: Body: Eyes: Depth: child fascinated by life, deer caught in headlights, young owl, dependent young, dog playing tug-of-war Sparkle: Stars in a dark night, reflected candlelight, skipping dancer Smile: quaking Jell-O, soft meniscus, wavering arch, wooden beam Hair: Color: raven feathers, starless eclipse Texture: wisps of threads, strings soft and fluffed by the wind Motion: wind sock in the breeze, tree limbs playing with the wind, soft sweeping broom, plumb line in still air Face: Color: light clay, pear, parchment Depth: wisdom, stone, far away, intertwined, a donkey Texture: wrinkled paper, a baby, ill-lain sheets on a soft, welcoming bed Motion: frozen in time, surge of energy, quickly drained pipe, house alarm Motion: Grace: a panther, an ostrich, a kitten, a donkey Strength: an offended kitten, a cylinder, a punch against chainmail Speed: a slinking cat, a running bird Spirit: Quality: pure silk, a champagne diamond Loyalty: the constant four seasons, the reoccurring moon phases Pride: a bird with a newly found gem, several scratches soon healed and strong Anger: clenched teeth, a sore eased by medicine Fear: an apprehensive kitten, a mouse constantly looking for shelter, a strong tower with shaking walls Strength: a strong roman pillar Mind: Clarity: a river feeding into the ocean, focused energy, buzzing sounds Depth: experience, child play, an owl, Knowledge: limited resources, primitive, wide Soul: open fields, mountaintop view Logic: playful, values of a child, calm leader Soul: Depth: a well becoming built, a sponge Passion: playful thoughts, spontaneous values, life-long principles Strength: an army never to surrender, firm ground The map format/categories were mostly from Raven of the Wood's essence map. Do we have a post somewhere that has every category/subcategory posted so we can go there and get them instead of from other peoples posts? I feel like I may be missing some, and perhaps am not even formatting this correctly. | |
| Author: | Cadenza [ August 29th, 2011, 2:14 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop | 
| I love love that book, and I love Janet! Good job on the essence map; I especially like the Anger metaphors. Phylis | |
| Author: | Seer of Endor [ November 4th, 2011, 4:48 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop | 
| Sorry it took me so long to notice this, Captain Nemo.  It looks really good.   | |
| Author: | Tsahraf ChahsidMimetes [ January 11th, 2012, 5:40 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop | 
| I like this, good job Captain Nemo! I do not know who Janet is, but these are my favorite parts: Body: Eyes: Depth: deer caught in headlights, dependent young, dog playing tug-of-war Smile: quaking Jell-O (I suppose you mean gel?), soft meniscus Hair: Color: starless eclipse Texture: wisps of threads, strings soft and fluffed by the wind Motion: soft sweeping broom, plumb line in still air Face: Depth: far away, intertwined, a donkey Texture: a baby, ill-lain sheets on a soft, welcoming bed Motion: frozen in time, quickly drained pipe Motion: Grace: a kitten, a donkey Strength: an offended kitten, a cylinder, a punch against chainmail Spirit: Quality: pure silk, a champagne diamond Pride: a bird with a newly found gem, several scratches soon healed and strong Anger: clenched teeth, a sore eased by medicine And my especially favorite parts: Body: Eyes: Depth: deer caught in headlights, dependent young, dog playing tug-of-war Hair: Color: starless eclipse Motion: plumb line in still air Face: Texture: a baby, ill-lain sheets on a soft, welcoming bed Motion: frozen in time, quickly drained pipe Motion: Strength: an offended kitten, a cylinder, a punch against chainmail Spirit: Quality: pure silk, a champagne diamond My favorite of all: Hair: Motion: plumb line in still air My favorite metaphore without regard for its application: quickly drained pipe Is Janet some one who is old, but seems very young, younger than twenty years? That is the concrete impression I had from the map. | |
| Author: | Sienna North [ January 16th, 2012, 7:49 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop | 
| Tsahraf wrote: Is Janet some one who is old, but seems very young, younger than twenty years? That is the concrete impression I had from the map. From my recollection, she's about twelve or so in this story. And, Cap'n, this is beautiful! I loved the story, and I think you did a great job capturing Janet's essence even from the rather limited description in the book. Your metaphors in particular were extremely striking. Makes me want to try one myself! | |
| Author: | Captain Nemo Marlene [ January 17th, 2012, 10:54 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop | 
| Thanks, guys! Yes, Janet is very young. | |
| Author: | Tsahraf ChahsidMimetes [ January 17th, 2012, 2:38 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Janet from Twenty and Ten by Claire Huchet Bishop | 
| ~Evenstar~ wrote: Makes me want to try one myself! Do! I want to see it. | |
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