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 Post subject: Xsil
PostPosted: August 28th, 2013, 11:44 am 
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This is an essence map of the way the MC of my current novel was like at the beginning of the novel. The structure is slightly odd, especially for a person, however it is a structure I use a lot as it helps me, personally, to get out the abstract idea of the character.

Hisself{
....Colour: Beads[
........<blue – Asia – black beads>
........Motion(
............<a whirling kite>
............<rain blur> ) ]
....Colour: Three[
........<blue – eyes – midnight>
........Mood(
............<three>
............<the delete key> ) ]
....Colour: Grease[
........<blue – grease – ravens>
........Texture(
............<glass>
............<a manikin handshake> ) ]
....Colour: Sirens[
........<blue – tinkling bells – shells in the surf>
........Sound(
............<sirens>
............<drizzle> ) ]
....Colour: Old[
........<blue – sweat – old black dust>
........Stillness(
............<broken fingers>
............<wind chimes> ) ]
....Motion(
........<\Three\> )
....Mood(
........<\Old\> )
....Texture(
........<\Sirens\> )
....Sound(
........<\Beads\> )
....Stillness(
........<\Grease\> ) }


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 Post subject: Re: Xsil
PostPosted: August 31st, 2013, 11:58 am 
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Excellent!!! I think....honestly, my grasp of Lauser X maps has always been pretty tenuous at best. :roll: :P

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 Post subject: Re: Xsil
PostPosted: September 5th, 2013, 9:06 am 
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Haha. :P Thanks, Seer. * grins *


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 Post subject: Re: Xsil
PostPosted: September 7th, 2013, 9:47 am 
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Hisself{
....Colour: Beads[
........<blue – Asia – black beads>
........Motion(
............<a whirling kite>
............<rain blur> ) ]
....Colour: Six[
........<blue – eyes – midnight>
........Mood(
............<six>
............<the delete key> ) ]
....Colour: Bitter[
........<blue – bitter – tea steam>
........Texture(
............<cold>
............<hands rubbing on each other> ) ]
....Colour: Sirens[
........<blue – tinkling bells – shells in the surf>
........Sound(
............<sirens>
............<screaming> ) ]
....Colour: Old{
........<blue – tears – old black dust>
........Stillness(
............<broken hands>
............<wind chimes> ) ]
....Motion(
........<\Six\> )
....Mood(
........<\Old\> )
....Texture(
........<\Sirens\> )
....Sound(
........<\Beads\> )
....Stillness(
........<\Bitter\> ) }

This is a version of the X for when my MC is at the end of the book. I have taken an idea from Lady Katharina and bolded all the changed pieces. :)


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