So, I'm pretty new at essence making, and I made this a while ago and posted it in my "newbies: the essence of essence" thread, but I figured I'd post it here and attempt to get an avatar (or a picture since this is of a character) from White Raven. So, here's my FirstX Map (I think it's properly formatted) and it only is in the first "stage." Please give any feedback that you have!
Victoria:
Body:
Eyes:
Color: is as green as an emerald sea.
Depth: waver in fear, fade in struggle, and glow with excitement and pleasure.
Sparkle: like the crest of the waves on the ocean.
Smile:
Dimples: one on her left cheek plays with the symmetry of her face.
Color: pink as bubblegum
Motion:when afraid, it hardens into an unbreakable line, when joyous, they curve merrily and mischievously, and once upset, they drag into an arch of disappointment.
Hair:
Color: as beautiful as the dirty sand on the beach
Up: curving and twisting in the wind like a flag on a pole
Down: straight as sticks, but flowing like a river
Motion: playful like the wind
Face: ever-changing like the sea: soft at calm, but also hard and confused.
Stature:
Normal: tall and strong, but wavering, like the Leaning Tower of Piza
Afraid: cowering low and unsure like a deer caught in the headlights of a car.
Angered: Towering like a fire column shooting in the air
Pleased: relaxed and playful like a lion cub.
Motion:
Grace: moves with brilliant coordination like a ballerina waltzing around the stage.
Strength: shows strong and reliable like a roman pillar
Speed: running with the wind.