I will try to make one on Tornado Cyclone for a start. Feel free to laugh!

Body: average for a 17 year old
 Hair: smooth, straight helmet hair
  Texture: soft
  Color: apple
   
 Eyes (before): confident
  Color: mud
  Warmth: like a teddy bear
 Eyes (now): acid
 Skin: standard Caucasian
  Color: this is a hard one... what's tan?
 Grace: of a bird
 

Soul: Pure and full of good intentions
 Heart: loving
 Mind: clear
  Clarity: like a crystal wall

Spirit: strong willed
 Loyalty: a dog's loyalty
 Courage: of a hero
 Faith:

Texture: rough, cowhide feeling. Battle-scarred.

Well done, Dri. I would love to see: Texture: Soft like a ...., so it gives more of a picture.

Nicely done, I didn't feel like laughing, it's good!

Nice Job, Dri, you have the basic formatting down.
What you should try is putting in metaphors instead of adjectives. For instance, instead of saying
say Color: blood
or Color: sunset
or Color: something-else-that-is-red
The idea is by insinuating a metaphor, you give a world of meaning in one word. Like in my Reiyen essence I described his countenance or face as a chiseled statue, rather than saying "sharp angled" or "solid." In one metaphor, by saying that his face is a chiseled statue, I conveyed both of those and more.

Thanks for the tip. I was wondering what a metaphor was before this.

I don't know if this helps, but I'm a tan caucasian and I refer to myself as "Carmel colored".