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Author:  Lady Elanor [ August 16th, 2011, 2:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Phillip's Essence Map.

It feels a bit choppy here and there, I think. Anyhow, here is Phillip's essence. He is going to be one of my characters in Tevo; I'm not fixed on his name yet, Phillip is temporary. :)


BODY
 Eyes
  Color
   - Blue ice glimmering in the morning sun
   - Soft as melting butter
   - a gold ring glinting in the moonlight
   - Warm as the setting sun
  Depth
   - A well filled with water, the end unseen.
   - Holding the future in his hands, something he doesn’t realise
   - Yearning to learn more, a thirst for learning.
 Face
  Shape
   - Round, gentle lines
   - Soft, the touch of fresh flowers
   - A wise man
   - A tender son
  Color
   - Like a white rose, tinted with pink
   - Cream and Strawberries.
   - A Pure, Pink Pearl
 Strength
   - Strong as a full grown lion
  Studious
   - Prefers study to fighting
   - Four older brothers who are warriors, is left at the side-lines
MIND
 Knowledge
   - Can guess the opponents next move before they make it
   - Wiser than his years
   
  Amount
    - An undiscovered cave
    - Star filled night sky.
Hope
- A cloudless sky
- Happiness
- The Sun’s rays playing on a field of poppies
- Passing stormy clouds

SPIRIT
Peaceful
- A sleeping baby
- A blackbird singing in the sunrise
- A pink sunset
Mind
- A clear spring
- Cloudless sky
- A Teacher
- A refreshing morning breeze

Author:  Elly [ August 16th, 2011, 2:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Phillip's Essence Map.

Oh, I like it! There was one place that I was confused, "A pale pink perfume". Could you perhaps change this to make it flow better? :D

Author:  Lady Elanor [ August 16th, 2011, 2:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Phillip's Essence Map.

Thanks, Elly! Ok, I changed it, but I'm not sure it's much better. :)

Author:  Calista Bethelle [ August 16th, 2011, 4:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Phillip's Essence Map.

Great job, Elanor! :D

Author:  Lady Elanor [ August 18th, 2011, 9:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Phillip's Essence Map.

Thanks, Milly! :)

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