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 Post subject: Sellion's Essence
PostPosted: February 8th, 2010, 6:03 pm 
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This is my first attempt at an essence map. Hopefully I did it right. After a while my brain lost the idea of using metaphors to describe things.
But it was pretty easy though.
I had all of the brackets lined up so it looked nice and neat, but when I pasted it here it wasn't lined up anymore. Oh well...
I will say, there is a certain... beauty, I guess you could say... to these essence maps.


SELLION

BODY{Eyes……………[Color…..(a clear summer sky)
………………………………..........(nightfall)
………………………………..........(a cold rushing river)]
………………………….[Depth…..(a shallow pool)
………………………………..........(staring into pitch-black darkness)
………………………………..........(knowing there is something there but not being able to reach it)]
………………………….[Sparkle…(stars in the night sky)
………………………………..........(candlelight dancing on a smooth surface)
………………………………..........(a steel blade in sunlight)
………………………………..........(a warm fire’s glow)
………………………………..........(a gentle gesture)]}
………{Smile………………………(a faint breeze)
………………………………..........(an inviting hug)
………………………………..........(as seldom seen as a hermit)
………………………………..........(a cold, proud king)}
………{Motion…………[Grace….(a determined assassin)
………………………………..........(a roaming vagabond)]
………………………….[Strength..(a quickly-built lean-to)
………………………………..........(someone who is very shy)]
…………………………..[Speed….(a tired stallion)
………………………………..........(a slow-flowing creek)
………………………………..........(an animal fleeing danger)]}

SPIRIT{…………………[Quality..(an undiscovered treasure)]
…………………………..[Trust…..(a broken heart)
………………………………..........(a crumbling mountainside)]
…………………………..[Fear……(a brave warrior)
………………………………..........(a charging lion)
………………………………..........(disregard for safety)]}

MIND.{………………….[Longing.(an abandoned child)]
…………………………...[Logic….(a quick decision)
………………………………..........(an angry blind man)


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PostPosted: February 9th, 2010, 8:23 am 
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You did very well indeed. There are some real gems in there. Good job!


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PostPosted: February 9th, 2010, 11:50 am 
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Thanks :D


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PostPosted: February 10th, 2010, 2:27 pm 
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Awesome. I think you're right, about the beauty of essence maps.

From what I got, Sellion is one of those delicate people who have an inner turmoil, right? Let's see if I read it right.

Good job!

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PostPosted: February 10th, 2010, 3:14 pm 
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Yep, pretty much.

I honestly don't quite understand him myself... :roll: life isn't near as bad for him as he thinks.

And thanks :)


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PostPosted: April 24th, 2010, 8:29 pm 
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Very nice!

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