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| Author: | Mama Raven Mimetes [ January 5th, 2010, 2:17 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Machu Picchu Essence Map |
So there I was at 3:00 in the morning wide awake and suddenly thinking ... "Machu Picchu has the cruel beauty of a steel blade." I have been listening to Vision Forum's new audio series Mysteries of the Ancient World and had just finished the section on the Incas. Needless to say I had to get out of bed and get a pencil! While I had quite a time reconstructing my handwriting, the next morning I had most of an Essence Map for Machu Picchu. I was pretty excited about it! I've been thinking about writing, but hadn't actually taken the time to do so. Now the writing has pretty much come to me. I figure when it wakes you up at night it apparently needs to be said! So anyway I thought I would share. Here is my first stab at Machu Picchu: MACHU PICCHU SETTING {Appearance[Beauty(jade green and silver) .........................................(city in the clouds) .........................................(a glittering diamond in a drift of ashes)] ...............................[Deception(stealthy and insidious as a flattering lie) .........................................(the alluring treachery of a drugged kiss)] ...............................[Strength(impregnable mountain fortress) .........................................(heavily guarded tower) .........................................(tiny green cave secreted in a dense wood)]} .............{Climate.......................................unfinished} FUNCTION{Political [Center(Rome) .........................................(beating heart) .........................................(spider's web)] ...............................[Domination(power like Jezebel) .........................................(empire larger than US) .........................................(even nobles aren't safe)] .............{Motion[Contemplative(deliberately chosen footing) .........................................(ceremonial approach) .........................................(city of five gates) .........................................(carefully executed battle strategy)] ...............................[Reach(ripples in a pond) .........................................(rapidly expanding cracks in the ice) .........................................(a pervasive odor)]} SPIRIT{Dark[Dangerous(a hidden dagger in the cloak of an unknown guest) .........................................(cruel beauty of a steel blade) .........................................(beautiful leper) .........................................(a poisoned welcome cup) .........................................(black, gold, and blood red)] ...............................[Religion(perfect peach rotting from the inside) .........................................(as a hyena consumes it's own young) .........................................(provokes wrath as a false friend)]} HISTORY {Endurance....................................unfinished} .............{Downfall.......................................unfinished} Thoughts? Reactions? Problems? Any feedback would be appreciated. Raven |
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| Author: | Whythawye [ January 5th, 2010, 2:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fragments |
Very very good! The use of the various attributes was imaginative and skillful. The syntax was clear and easy to follow. You have the makings of a book there! I do not know if you got across the 'right' essence, but you definitely got across an essence! |
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| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 20th, 2010, 3:36 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map |
Jay pointed me to this thread, WR. Great essence! I'm going to download it and peruse it a bit further and post some comments. Just about the only non-character/username based essence I've seen yet. Great! eruheran |
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| Author: | Mama Raven Mimetes [ July 27th, 2010, 12:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map |
Thanks Eruheran I really should flesh it out and write something around it. ~Raven |
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| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 27th, 2010, 11:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map |
You should...Macchu Picchu has always fascinated me...I'd read it! |
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| Author: | Seer of Endor [ July 30th, 2010, 4:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map |
eruheran wrote: Just about the only non-character/username based essence I've seen yet. My essence map for Corrin is about a magical stone |
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| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 30th, 2010, 10:09 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map |
Where is that one? I haven't seen it around. Is it in the Essence Maps forum? *goes and hunts for it* eruheran |
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