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Author:  Mama Raven Mimetes [ January 5th, 2010, 2:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Machu Picchu Essence Map

So there I was at 3:00 in the morning wide awake
and suddenly thinking ...
"Machu Picchu has the cruel beauty of a steel blade."

I have been listening to Vision Forum's new audio series
Mysteries of the Ancient World and had just finished
the section on the Incas.

Needless to say I had to get out of bed and get a pencil!
While I had quite a time reconstructing my handwriting,
the next morning I had most of an Essence Map for Machu Picchu.

I was pretty excited about it! I've been thinking about writing,
but hadn't actually taken the time to do so.
Now the writing has pretty much come to me.
I figure when it wakes you up at night it apparently needs to be said!
;)

So anyway I thought I would share.
Here is my first stab at Machu Picchu:


MACHU PICCHU
SETTING {Appearance[Beauty(jade green and silver)
.........................................(city in the clouds)
.........................................(a glittering diamond in a drift of ashes)]
...............................[Deception(stealthy and insidious as a flattering lie)
.........................................(the alluring treachery of a drugged kiss)]
...............................[Strength(impregnable mountain fortress)
.........................................(heavily guarded tower)
.........................................(tiny green cave secreted in a dense wood)]}
.............{Climate.......................................unfinished}

FUNCTION{Political [Center(Rome)
.........................................(beating heart)
.........................................(spider's web)]
...............................[Domination(power like Jezebel)
.........................................(empire larger than US)
.........................................(even nobles aren't safe)]
.............{Motion[Contemplative(deliberately chosen footing)
.........................................(ceremonial approach)
.........................................(city of five gates)
.........................................(carefully executed battle strategy)]
...............................[Reach(ripples in a pond)
.........................................(rapidly expanding cracks in the ice)
.........................................(a pervasive odor)]}

SPIRIT{Dark[Dangerous(a hidden dagger in the cloak of an unknown guest)
.........................................(cruel beauty of a steel blade)
.........................................(beautiful leper)
.........................................(a poisoned welcome cup)
.........................................(black, gold, and blood red)]
...............................[Religion(perfect peach rotting from the inside)
.........................................(as a hyena consumes it's own young)
.........................................(provokes wrath as a false friend)]}

HISTORY {Endurance....................................unfinished}
.............{Downfall.......................................unfinished}


Thoughts? Reactions? Problems? Any feedback would be appreciated. :)

Raven

Author:  Whythawye [ January 5th, 2010, 2:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Fragments

Very very good!

The use of the various attributes was imaginative and skillful. The syntax was clear and easy to follow. You have the makings of a book there!

I do not know if you got across the 'right' essence, but you definitely got across an essence!

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 20th, 2010, 3:36 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map

Jay pointed me to this thread, WR. Great essence! I'm going to download it and peruse it a bit further and post some comments. Just about the only non-character/username based essence I've seen yet. Great!

eruheran

Author:  Mama Raven Mimetes [ July 27th, 2010, 12:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map

Thanks Eruheran :)
I really should flesh it out and write something around it.
~Raven

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 27th, 2010, 11:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map

You should...Macchu Picchu has always fascinated me...I'd read it! :D

Author:  Seer of Endor [ July 30th, 2010, 4:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map

eruheran wrote:
Just about the only non-character/username based essence I've seen yet.
My essence map for Corrin is about a magical stone :)

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ July 30th, 2010, 10:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Machu Picchu Essence Map

Where is that one? I haven't seen it around. Is it in the Essence Maps forum? *goes and hunts for it*

eruheran

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