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Dreamer's Essence
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Author:  Celestria [ February 3rd, 2010, 7:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Dreamer's Essence
This is the essence of the main character in the book series I'm writing now. I'm not exactly sure if I did it right, but here it goes.

Dreamer
… Body {Eyes……..[Color (A newly polished sapphire)
……………………..[Depth (A clear pool)
………………………………..(Desperate longing)
………………………………..(piercing as an eagle’s eye)
…………………......[Sparkle (Stars at night)
……………………………….(Lightning flashes)]}
………..{Smile……………….(sun shining through the trees)
………………………………..(rainbow after a storm)
………………………………..(rare as a shooting star)}
……….{Hair…........................(the color of chocolate)
………………………………..(flowing like the wind)}
……….{Motion………………(swift as an arrow from a bow)
………………………………..(an eagle in flight)
………………………………..(a gust of wind)}
……….{Beauty……………...(light in darkness)
……………………………….(a moonlit night)
………………………………..(a summer sunrise)}
…Spirit {……………………..(heart of a warrior)
………………………………..(mysterious as night)
………………………………..(a caged animal)}
…Soul {Longing……………..(friendless in need of a friend)
………………………………..(a second chance)]}
Author:  PrincessoftheKing [ February 5th, 2010, 9:09 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Dreamer's Essence
You did a great job! I think my favorite metaphors might be the ones in "smile". You did a really great job with those ones! :)
Author:  Mama Raven Mimetes [ February 5th, 2010, 2:28 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Dreamer's Essence
oooo
eyes as deep as desperate longing.

I like it!
The whole thing is good.
:)

~Raven
Author:  Lady Jaryn [ February 6th, 2010, 9:55 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Dreamer's Essence
I'm really liking it!! I especially like the smile and the depth of the eyes..
Author:  Celestria [ February 8th, 2010, 12:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Dreamer's Essence
Thanks! I'm glad you all like it!!

And Lady Jaryn, I would have to agree with you. Those are my favorite descriptions of her too. :D
Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ April 30th, 2010, 9:18 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Dreamer's Essence
Very nice! :D
Author:  Lady Terra [ May 1st, 2010, 5:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Dreamer's Essence
I like it!
Author:  Celestria [ May 2nd, 2010, 7:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Dreamer's Essence
Inesdar wrote:
Kind of the 'helpless innocent'


Innocent, yes... but helpless. Ha! You do not know my friend. She can be much more dangerous than she appears. :roll: Ok, so I'm bragging on my character - a little.
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