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Author:  Harvester of Pearls [ May 31st, 2011, 4:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Two characters and the villains: (need help with questions)

Falcon: raised to protect the royal family he goes to 'our world' to find the princess and end up cross dressing so that he will be accepted as her friend until he can bring her back to her proper world.
How can I have him react to this?
How should I have Rain (the princess) react to him once she learns about him?

Caesar: Mother was born with rare genetics that made her act like a wild animal, her parents married her off to a merchant as soon as they were able. He was born and the father sold him to the military.
Should I keep him in contact with his mother?
He is going to be often shown in the enemies lair just sitting there quietly, they know he's there... why don't they have any problems with him being there?

Villains: right now they have no purpose. (D:) I thought of maybe they want to kill/capture Rain because she would be the only one not carrying the illness that they accidentally released a long time ago. (will explain Rain if needed)

Thank you guys~ :book:

Author:  Harvester of Pearls [ June 1st, 2011, 3:45 pm ]
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Anyone? I just started it today as part of the june nanowrimo.

Author:  Lady Eruwaedhiel [ June 1st, 2011, 6:57 pm ]
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I think it would be helpful if you posted a summary or something about the general gist of your story. That would help clarify some things. :)

Author:  Harvester of Pearls [ June 2nd, 2011, 9:04 am ]
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Ok.
Summary:
Rain is not as normal as she thinks, first the train to New York gets hijacked by strange people wearing masks, then she learns that her best friend really was a warrior watching out for her and waiting to bring her to a different world. Now she finds that she is being followed by a man with white hair wearing a fedora... What is she to do?

Bad summary lol, anyways, I hope this helps some.

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ June 4th, 2011, 7:49 am ]
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Wearing a Fedora? We should get Elanhil in here :roll:

It sounds interesting. I can imagine the surprise at knowing your best friend is a warrior from another world :P

So, where did these genetics from Caesar's mother come from? How did she get them? Were they passed on to Caesar at all?

eru

Author:  Harvester of Pearls [ June 4th, 2011, 1:46 pm ]
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The genetics? :) I was thinking that what the Mother had was a case of the genetics for her were rarer (She did pass them on though)

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ June 5th, 2011, 8:56 pm ]
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So he has some of the traits, but not all?

eru

Author:  Harvester of Pearls [ June 6th, 2011, 7:53 am ]
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I would think so. (He is raised as sort of a berserker)

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ June 6th, 2011, 8:18 am ]
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Ah, ok :shock:

eru

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