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| Author: | Dri [ May 26th, 2011, 6:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Ateuwa's Essence |
I finished this one recently... it's my second essence map. BODY {Hair [Color (Blonde ...........................<Faded yellow car> ............................<Melted vanilla ice cream>)] {Eyes [Color (Hazel ................................<Shadows> .............................<Melted Hershey's Chocolate bar>)] [Depth (Deep .................................<The deepest ocean> ..................................<Outer space>)] [Smile (Kind/Outgoing/Gorgeous .............................<A butterfly's open wings> ....................................<Assorted colors of leaves on trees, reflecting on a crystal clear lake>)] {Lips [Color (Pink ...............................<Sparkling ice> .................................<Flamingo's feathers>)] {Motion [Grace (Very smooth .................................<A swan swimming in the water> ...................................<Ice skating on fresh ice>)] [Speed {Average 75 % .........................................<A sprinter placing 3rd> ..............................................<A horse trotting>)] [Strength (Average 70 % ...........................................<Lifting weights for a year> ........................................<A karate blue belt>)] [Beauty (Above average 100 % .................................<Everything beautiful put into one scene> .......................................<Pure white snow with no footprints>)] {Spirit [Loyalty (Hard to earn ..............................<The wolf in Dances With Wolves> .......................................<A thief trying to pay for an apple>)] {Fear [Aspects (None ...............................<A dragon fighting a bear>)] {Mind [Clarity (Clear ..............................<Glass newly cleaned>)] [Knowledge (Above average 95 % ..................................<A scholar's mind> .............................<A fourth year college kid>)] ...........{Logic [About emotions/morals (Below average 45 % ...........................<Knowing the very basics of web design> ................................<Taking square dance lessons for the first time>)] ......................[About battle strategy (Average 50 % .............................<Winning third place in a chess tournament> .......................................<Winning Stratego>)] {Soul [Depth (Very deep 100 % ............................<Black hole>)] .........{Longing [For riches (Non-Existent 0 % ...........................<A blind man wanting to lose his cane> .........................<Someone poor wanting less>)] .........................[For love/family (A lot 95 % ............................<A husband's love for his wife> ...................................<The love we have for the USA>)]} |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ May 27th, 2011, 10:54 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ateuwa's Essence |
Well done, Dri! Just remember, I don't think you're supposed to use colours in your metaphors, rather try and describe it in a different way. I'm not very good at doing these kind of essence maps, so am not sure about that though! 'A butterfly's open wings.' I love that one! |
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| Author: | Dri [ May 27th, 2011, 6:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ateuwa's Essence |
Thanks! Neither am I, really. I had a little help. |
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