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 Post subject: Ark
PostPosted: April 12th, 2011, 9:00 pm 
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This is my first attempt at essence...and I expect it shows. :P So here's my first essence map, for my character Ark.

Body:
 Hair:
  Texture: spider's silk
  Color: snow
   rays of sunlight
 Eyes (before):
  Color: liquid gold
  Warmth: a fire in a fireplace
 Eyes (now): a deep well
 Skin:
  Color: a sheet of paper
 Grace: a dancer
  a cat

Soul:
 lost in a forest
 a lone statue on an empty plain
 Heart: a broken glass
  an injured child
  standing at a window looking out
 Mind:
  Clarity: a still pool

Spirit:
 Loyalty: an old hunting dog
 Courage: a man with nothing more to lose
 Faith: a flickering ember

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You have blue skin with orange polka dots. Four eyes, one red, one yellow, one green, and one blue. You have four arms, two are furry and two are scaly. One ear is a floppy dog's ear and the other is a pointy dog's ear. Your hair is a mess of tentacles. You have the body of a centaur, with four wings and two tails (both with feathers on the end). Two wings are pink. The other two are green and black, respectively. You have a row of sharp spines going down your back (very sharp). You also hiccup rainbow bubbles... ~Vili
So, now you all know what I look like.

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 Post subject: Re: Ark
PostPosted: April 13th, 2011, 4:16 pm 
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I love it, Lea, it is beautiful.

Leandra Falconwing wrote:
Faith: a flickering ember

Clarity: a still pool


Those are so pretty, they paint a clear picture in my mind straight away. Well done!

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All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

J. R. R. Tolkien


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 Post subject: Re: Ark
PostPosted: April 24th, 2011, 9:49 pm 
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See, this is the character I want to read more about. :shock:
Nicely done. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Ark
PostPosted: April 25th, 2011, 12:26 pm 
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Thanks, both of you. I still feel like it's really lacking some things that I simply don't know how to essence map yet, but I hope it at least gets across the basics.

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You have blue skin with orange polka dots. Four eyes, one red, one yellow, one green, and one blue. You have four arms, two are furry and two are scaly. One ear is a floppy dog's ear and the other is a pointy dog's ear. Your hair is a mess of tentacles. You have the body of a centaur, with four wings and two tails (both with feathers on the end). Two wings are pink. The other two are green and black, respectively. You have a row of sharp spines going down your back (very sharp). You also hiccup rainbow bubbles... ~Vili
So, now you all know what I look like.

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