That's great!
I especially like the parts about the night sky and the falling snowflake!
Looks to me like you got it!
~Raven
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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ January 15th, 2010, 8:09 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Alyse's Essence |
Here's my first shot at Essence... Hopefully I did it right! ALYSE BODY{Eyes...........[Color (Meadow of Wild Violets) ...................................(Twilight)] ..........................[Depth (The Ocean) ....................................(Dreamless Sleep) ....................................(Looking into the Night Sky)] ..........................[Sparkle (The Sea at Sunset)]} .......{Smile.......................(A Single Candle) .....................................(A Bluebird Singing)} .......{Motion.........[Grace (A Lion Preparing to Pounce) ....................................(A gently falling snowflake)] ..........................[Strength (A runner)] ..........................[Speed (A Diving Falcon) ....................................(An Arrow)]} ......{Beauty...................(A Galloping Stallion) ....................................(A Rose in Full Bloom)} SPIRIT {.................[Quality (A Priceless Ruby in the Rough)] .............................[Leadership (Thoughtful)] .............................[Loyalty (Old Faithful)] .............................[Fear (A Young Bird Attempting to Fly) .....................................(A Child Learning to Walk)] |
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| Author: | Lady Eruwaedhiel [ January 17th, 2010, 4:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
Fantastic. You've done a great job describing her. |
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| Author: | Mama Raven Mimetes [ January 17th, 2010, 5:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
That's great! I especially like the parts about the night sky and the falling snowflake! Looks to me like you got it! ~Raven |
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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ January 17th, 2010, 5:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
Thanks!!! lol You can kind of tell that I was getting tired during the "Spirit" part... the first section is much better! 
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| Author: | Mama Raven Mimetes [ January 17th, 2010, 6:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
LOL I know what you mean! When I made my essence of Machu Picchu it was kind of exhausting ... and obsessive!  But the neat thing about the essence mapping system is that it's very easy to add things after you've made the basic structure. As you get to know your character better you can add more and more details. Then when you run into a situation where you are wondering what your character would do you can look back over the essence map and refresh your memory of what they are truly like at heart. ~Raven |
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| Author: | Whythawye [ January 18th, 2010, 4:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
Very good. It looks like you definitely got it! You need to be careful with those though, I almost fell in love with her!
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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ January 18th, 2010, 8:41 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
LOL I guess that means I did well!
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| Author: | Lord Kieren Mimetes [ January 20th, 2010, 12:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
I love it Abby! |
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| Author: | Ciela Rose [ January 22nd, 2010, 7:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
Really good, I can almost see her . . . |
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| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ January 22nd, 2010, 8:16 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alyse's Essence |
Thanks, Ciela Rose and Griffin!
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