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Author:  Leandra Falconwing [ April 12th, 2011, 9:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Ark

This is my first attempt at essence...and I expect it shows. :P So here's my first essence map, for my character Ark.

Body:
 Hair:
  Texture: spider's silk
  Color: snow
   rays of sunlight
 Eyes (before):
  Color: liquid gold
  Warmth: a fire in a fireplace
 Eyes (now): a deep well
 Skin:
  Color: a sheet of paper
 Grace: a dancer
  a cat

Soul:
 lost in a forest
 a lone statue on an empty plain
 Heart: a broken glass
  an injured child
  standing at a window looking out
 Mind:
  Clarity: a still pool

Spirit:
 Loyalty: an old hunting dog
 Courage: a man with nothing more to lose
 Faith: a flickering ember

Author:  Lady Elanor [ April 13th, 2011, 4:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ark

I love it, Lea, it is beautiful.

Leandra Falconwing wrote:
Faith: a flickering ember

Clarity: a still pool


Those are so pretty, they paint a clear picture in my mind straight away. Well done!

Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ April 24th, 2011, 9:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ark

See, this is the character I want to read more about. :shock:
Nicely done. :D

Author:  Leandra Falconwing [ April 25th, 2011, 12:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ark

Thanks, both of you. I still feel like it's really lacking some things that I simply don't know how to essence map yet, but I hope it at least gets across the basics.

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