Ooh another one! I like these, Raven. This one seems to be something that isn't very nice, am I right? I feel quite sad after reading it, it's very dark, if I'm getting the right feel!
It's really good.
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ March 23rd, 2011, 1:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Devon Eagle Ortega |
Devon Eagle Ortega Body: ........Eyes: ...............Colour: angry sky / dull silver ...............Depth: a desert mirage ...............Glitter: a devious idea / a calculating glance / anger/ ice ........Smile: a trick up your sleeve / a cruel taunt ........Hair: ...............Colour: coal / crude oil ...............Texture: a strangling cord / blood ........Face: a forbidding cliff / a strong will ........Motion: ...............Grace: a practised motion ...............Strength: a trained wrestler / a boulder ...............Speed: a stab with a knife / a bolt of lightning Spirit: ........Quality: shattered glass ........Loyalty: a friend that takes but does not give / a leech ........Pride: a roaring lion / a haughty prince ........Anger: a rushing tornado / a punch to the stomach / a churning river ........Leadership: a dictator / an abusive father / a death threat ........Integrity: a hidden knife / a choke from behind Mind: ........Clarity: an algae choked stream ........Depth: a forbidding mountain range ........Knowledge: a book of lies / an assassin’s apprentice ........Logic: a calculated crime Soul: ........Depth: blind eyes ........Hate: a choking sandstorm / drowning |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ March 23rd, 2011, 6:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devon Eagle Ortega |
Ooh another one! I like these, Raven. This one seems to be something that isn't very nice, am I right? I feel quite sad after reading it, it's very dark, if I'm getting the right feel! It's really good.
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ March 23rd, 2011, 6:19 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devon Eagle Ortega |
Aww, thanks, Elanor! Yes, you are right. Devon is my villain in this story. |
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| Author: | wRen [ March 24th, 2011, 12:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devon Eagle Ortega |
Great job! I love the eyes! Gorgeous picture, even though I actually hate the character. 
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ March 24th, 2011, 12:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devon Eagle Ortega |
Lady Dusk wrote: Great job! I love the eyes! Gorgeous picture, even though I actually hate the character. Ria! *glomps* Thanks so much! Of course you hate him. You're supposed to.
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