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| Author: | Bethany Faith [ March 4th, 2011, 7:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
I'm not entirely certain what possessed me to tell Manda I would try essence mapping, but something did, so here I am. Trying essence mapping. Which is apparently fun and not the stress-inducing mess I've made. Emuna Of The Wise BODY Look and Feel{ Skin[ (The wet sand on the beach) (A rose petal) (A pearl)] Hair[ (brown river rock) (dirt after it rains) (swells on the open sea)] Eyes[ (caramel) (a dead leaf) (a broken heart) (A stormy night)]} Movement{ Walk[ (prowling lion) (floating cloud) (a palace)] Run[ (a cheetah) (wind on a summer's eve) (leaves falling from trees)] Standing/Sitting[ (sand in an hourglass) (hummingbird perched on a tree) (panther descending from a tree)] Motion[ (a pendulum) (a butterfly in mid-flight) (the sunsetting in the evening)]} MIND Memories{ Mother[ (ocean waves at night) (tears on a coffin) (diamond on a red cloth)] Father[ (tornado) (lightning striking during a thunderstorm) (fear)] Personality{ Outward[ (well composed all the time) (stay out of the crowd) (a bite worse than her bark)] Inward[ (a shaking bush) (a vase crashing to the ground) (hidden memories)] So...that would be it. Whatever it is. Hope you enjoyed! Bethany Faith |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ March 4th, 2011, 7:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
I love the similies you have used Beth! Very graceful. For a first one it's amazing. Well done! My only question is: is it supposed to say 'a bite worse than her bark' or is it supposed to read 'a bark worse than her bite?' |
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| Author: | Bethany Faith [ March 4th, 2011, 7:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
Elanor wrote: I love the similies you have used Beth! Very graceful. For a first one it's amazing. Well done! My only question is: is it supposed to say 'a bite worse than her bark' or is it supposed to read 'a bark worse than her bite?' Thanks. It's supposed to say, "a bite worse than her bark". I couldn't think of any other way to put it... |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ March 4th, 2011, 7:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
Hah! I like it. Bethany Faith wrote: Motion[ (a pendulum) (a butterfly in mid-flight) (the sunsetting in the evening)]} I love that part! |
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| Author: | Bethany Faith [ March 4th, 2011, 7:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
Thanks. |
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| Author: | Manda Kondrael [ March 4th, 2011, 8:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
Yay!! My little sister did her essence map like she said she would. Love it, Bethy! |
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| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ March 4th, 2011, 9:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
I loved this metaphor: "swells on the open sea;" that just spoke volumes about her hair (seriously! For a first essence map, that's really good, Bethany. Great job! eruheran |
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| Author: | Bethany Faith [ March 4th, 2011, 10:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
eruheran wrote: I loved this metaphor: "swells on the open sea;" that just spoke volumes about her hair (seriously! For a first essence map, that's really good, Bethany. Great job! eruheran Vili came up with "swells on the open sea" I really liked it too. And the "diamond on a red cloth" one is something mom said when referring to the night sky. Thanks. |
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| Author: | Tsahraf ChahsidMimetes [ April 13th, 2013, 2:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Emuna Of The Wise; Essence Map |
This is a very good essence map! My favorite parts: BODY Look and Feel{ Skin[ (The wet sand on the beach) Hair[ (brown river rock) Eyes[ (a broken heart) (A stormy night)]} Run[ (leaves falling from trees)] MIND Memories{ Mother[ (ocean waves at night) (tears on a coffin) (diamond on a red cloth)] Father[ (tornado) (lightning striking during a thunderstorm) (fear)] Personality{ Outward[ (well composed all the time) Inward[ (a shaking bush) (a vase crashing to the ground) (hidden memories)] My favorite of these: BODY Hair[ (brown river rock) Memories{ Mother[ (ocean waves at night) (tears on a coffin) (diamond on a red cloth)] Inward[ (a shaking bush) (a vase crashing to the ground) (hidden memories)] My most favorite piece of them: Memories{ Mother[ (ocean waves at night) Andrew Amnon Mimetes wrote: I also really liked "diamond on a red cloth." by itself this was by far my favorite piece: "ocean swells at night" was my favorite in the context of the map, you see.Andrew Amnon Mimetes wrote: For a first essence map, that's really good, Bethany. Great job! I love it.Keep on essencing! |
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