This one was a little harder. I felt like I was grasping at straws, and I had to resort to some flower symbolism. I don't know if that makes it deeper or weaker.

Marian Fitzooth
…Body {Eyes…… [Color (Melted milk chocolate)
…………………………………… (Dark bay horse)]
…………………….... [Depth (A doe's eyes)]
……………………… [Sparkle (A mirror)]}
……… {Smile………………… (A summer day)]}
...... {Hair...... [Color (Chestnuts)
............................... (Dark maple syrup)]
.................... [Texture (Ocean waves)
................................ (Brocade)]
.......{Face......[Colour (Partridge eggs)]
.....................[Shape (Well-polished marble statue)]
……… {Motion... [Grace (Hummingbirds)
…………………………………… (Grass swaying in the wind)
.................... [Strength (Spun glass)]
……………………….[Agility (A gymnast)
...............................(A young child)]}
…….. {Beauty……………... (A willow tree)
……………………………………. (Lake Moraine)
…………………………………... (Starry sky)]}

…Spirit {…………[Quality (New snow)]
……………………… [Gentleness (A mother with her child)
......................................(Velvet)
......................................(A lullaby)]
……………………… [Loyalty (Dolphins)
.................................(Daisies)]}

…Mind {………………… [Clarity (Sheltered spring)
……………………………………….....(Diamonds)]
…………………………….. [Depth (A pool below a waterfall)]
…………………………….. [Knowledge (A mother explaining the world to her child)
………………………………….............. (A young scholar)]
...........................[Logic (A blunt comment)
………………………………….......(Prairies)]}

…Soul {………………… [Depth (A crater on the moon)
………………………………………… (A forest)]
……………………………. [Purity (A quiet night
………………………………………… (Lilies)]
…………………………… [Love (A new mother)
..................................(A newlywed)]}

I see what you mean. Not your strongest work, but it's still a well-crafted essence map. If you really have issues with it, I'd say sleep on it a night or two and then come back to it if you like. But I really think that this one works very well. Keep up the good work.

Thanks.