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| Author: | Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ January 28th, 2011, 11:33 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Wow, what is this, my fourth thread in two days in the same forum? Whatever. When I write it's like navigating a maze. We had this 98 laptop once, and the screen saver was this brick maze that you went through at a dizzying speed, barely missing smashing into walls, and often times hitting deadends. That's me.   This might be a result of my panster tendencies. When I write I write fast, and with assurance. and when I stop it's complete. I come to a fork in the road, I whiz off in the logical direction, I take a shortcut through the woods, I race along a dizzying clifftop, I abruptly turn around in a complete U to go back through the woods and then... bang. Brick wall. It makes my head hurt, literally. I usually yell really loud, my smoking pencil coming to a sudden halt. I think about it to see if it's just a little bump, and if it's not I complain to whoever is in the room. That doesn't usually solve the problem. I'll spend days not writing at all, trying to find a hidden door, a rope ladder, an underground passage way or a tunnel. Sometimes it's a dead end. Sometimes I just don't know which direction to turn. Sometimes I just give up and go find something else to write and six months later I come back and it's plain as day. The door was there the whole time, and I couldn't see it. Then I pick up my pen and go whizzing off again, just as reckless as before. It's great fun. On occasion, after careful consideration, I realize I took a wrong turn. Then I back up, page by painful page until I reach the point of error. Taking a different route I go spinning off down the tree of possibilities again. I was talking about this subject with Jonathan in chat tonight. His style is a bit different. He doesn't speed, pays attention to road signs and therefore avoids falling off of cliffs and smacking into brick walls hard enough to break ones head. He describes himself as being plagued with flat tires, one after another. His journey is slow and steady, and more sure of arrival... eventually. So there are two examples? (and I had to ask him to use his, since just one wouldn't have been enough to explain myself.) How about you? What does your road map look like? | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ January 29th, 2011, 12:32 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I'm glad I could be an example.   Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote: I was talking about this subject with Jonathan in chat tonight. His style is a bit different. He doesn't speed, pays attention to road signs and therefore avoids falling off of cliffs and smacking into brick walls hard enough to break ones head. He describes himself as being plagued with flat tires, one after another. His journey is slow and steady, and more sure of arrival... eventually. I like that you said "more sure", since sometimes I still go in the wrong direction, but usually I realize this early on and just have to start over. | |
| Author: | BushMaid [ January 29th, 2011, 6:36 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I'm a car wreck waiting to happen.  But usually the thing that pulls me up at the brick wall is a lack of either names, countries, or minor plot holes. My brick wall really is a speedhump that I am just too lazy to push the car over.   | |
| Author: | Elly [ January 29th, 2011, 10:36 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I go over speedbumps and just keep going. I hit my brakes, go to an abrupt stop, turn the car around in a 1-way u-turn and keep going against the traffic until I find my turn. Then I whiz past the other cars, and go through crazy turns and loops until I reach the end of the race.   | |
| Author: | Varon [ January 29th, 2011, 5:45 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I'm more of a motorcycle speeding at reckless speeds along the most dangerous roads, trusting the speed to keep me from falling. Later on, I'll come back with a bulldozer and plow down the bumps. | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ January 29th, 2011, 6:06 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Those are all good ways of describing your writing styles.   | |
| Author: | Leandra Falconwing [ January 29th, 2011, 7:43 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I'm continually seeing a new car, abandoning my old one, and giving the new one a try.  When I'm doing something like NaNo, though, where I have to keep going and I have to keep getting words, it's actually a fairly smooth ride. The map may look rather crazy and twisted when I'm done, but I never truly ran into any dead ends--and if I did, I punched my way through them. | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ January 29th, 2011, 8:28 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Leandra Falconwing wrote: I'm continually seeing a new car, abandoning my old one, and giving the new one a try.    I've done that many times in the past, though I'm trying to stop now.   | |
| Author: | Lady Eruwaedhiel [ January 29th, 2011, 9:03 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Most of the times I'm under the car trying to fix it! When I'm not, I am usually running completely over the road signs and off the edges of cliffs, only finding the handy (perhaps too handy) parachute at the last minute. I also have no headlights. | |
| Author: | BushMaid [ January 29th, 2011, 9:45 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Lady Eruwaedhiel wrote: Most of the times I'm under the car trying to fix it! When I'm not, I am usually running completely over the road signs and off the edges of cliffs, only finding the handy (perhaps too handy) parachute at the last minute. I also have no headlights.  *laughing* I love this! Who ever thought writing a novel was like a car?   | |
| Author: | Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ January 30th, 2011, 12:14 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Me, apparently...  Although I only ever thought if it in terms of brick walls and Jonathan added the concept of tires. Brick walls are the only way I can describe coming to a halt in my writing. And there are different kinds of walls. And I go on about them at great length to my hapless family.   I'm a crazy fantasy writer... | |
| Author: | BushMaid [ January 30th, 2011, 2:39 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Don't ever change, Vanya.   | |
| Author: | Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ January 30th, 2011, 10:56 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I'm doing my best.   | |
| Author: | BushMaid [ January 30th, 2011, 3:14 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Good.  The trouble for my "car" is that it takes forever for me to pull it out of the brick wall that it has piled into headlong. I've got to analyse, pick over, delete, re-write tons of stuff because the brick wall is so formidable. I'm still doing it to one of my novels, revamping my car, sticking new bits on it, and pulling off excess bricks still stuck in the windows...   | |
| Author: | Varon [ January 30th, 2011, 3:24 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| Yes, there are road bumps for me. I just go faster and catch air, pull a few stunts and make it look cool. | |
| Author: | BushMaid [ January 30th, 2011, 4:34 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| That sounds like the way my brother would do it, if he wrote.  Wish I could do that!   | |
| Author: | Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ January 30th, 2011, 7:41 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| My sister told me to post that she can't ever get her "car" started.   It's a very good analogy too, she loves world building but never has any plot. | |
| Author: | Varon [ January 30th, 2011, 7:57 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| That sounds like my fantasy experience. The story just doesn't seem to be there. My modern or future ones I can make everything up on the fly, but not fantasy. | |
| Author: | Mama Raven Mimetes [ January 31st, 2011, 5:40 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I used to write prolifically when I was in school... Pretty much everything. Stories, poetry, essays, persuasive, descriptive, informational etc. It's been years since I've written anything. So I thought I'd post in this thread to give you an idea what my writing experience looks like now. (since you're talking in terms of car travel I'll do likewise) When I write it's also like a car trip. I think... "Hmmm... I'd like to go to ____." So I start planning the trip. I pack up all the stuff I need. I get on my coat. Put on my shoes. Pick up my car keys. Walk out the door.  Get to the garage and realize it's locked.  Go back the house and look for the garage key.  While looking for the garage key somebody mentions that they're hungry.  So I fix lunch.  We eat.  Then we have to clean up.  Ok, ready now!  So I go out and unlock the garage only to discover that I've left my car keys in the house.  Back to house for the car key.  While I'm trying to remember where I put the car key while I was fixing lunch someone spills a glass of grape juice on the carpet.  So I get out the cleaning supplies and quickly clean up the mess.  Then the phone rings.  After an hour long conversation with a distant family member, I look around confusedly trying to remember what it was precisely that I was trying to do.  Oh! right!  I was leaving.  While gathering my coat and keys (both sets) I hear the UPS man pull into the driveway.  So I go sign for the package.  Then the dh comes home from work early.  By the time I get finished catching up with him it's time to make supper.  After supper of course I clean up.  Then it's time to get everybody ready for bed.  Nevermind the trip... I'm tired.  ~Raven | |
| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ February 1st, 2011, 1:17 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I'm usually under the hood fixing the motor so that it will run. I go a few blocks, then get out and tweak something again. Then I stop at the store for a few hours and don't get anything done. =P I just tweak too much. eruheran | |
| Author: | Skathi [ November 3rd, 2011, 9:59 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
|   This is an AWESOME thread.   | |
| Author: | Suiauthon Mimetes [ November 7th, 2011, 1:52 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I love this thread.  When I decide start figuring out which path I'm going to take to navigate the brick maze, I use crayola crayons to start tracing a path on my map. When I realize that my world building has reached a dead-end, I take a different colored crayon and start trying to complete the maze from another point... until my crayon hits into another dead-end. (this is the stage that all of my brick mazes except Murel, Captured, and The Origin of Dark Island are in) Sometimes, my crayon will go so far that I'll decide to actually start driving my bicycle (@Andrew because I'm not driving a car  ) and see how far I can get.  Much to my chagrin and pain, however, it doesn't take long for me to turn a corner and suddenly spin out when I see a brick wall I hadn't noticed on the map suddenly loom in front of me.  Then I go back to the old crayon map until I think I'm ready to try driving through the maze again. (this is how the stories in Murel have been progressing) Every once in awhile, I'll get on a bike and decide to just start driving and see what happens. Many bruises, scrapes, and pints of lost blood later I finally decide to go and try another brick maze for now and come back to this maze later.  (that's Captured and The Origin of Dark Island) | |
| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ November 7th, 2011, 2:04 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I didn't even realize I'd posted in this thread before....  What I wrote is pretty accurate, I guess *shrugs* Although I'd say that my writing style is generally that of pushing a car. I push it through the road hugging my map tight to me, and taking forever to go just a little while. But everything must be perfect! I rarely hit a wall only because I see them coming from far off. Then I sit down and plan about how to avoid the wall - in the meantime I stop pushing my car  eru | |
| Author: | Suiauthon Mimetes [ November 8th, 2011, 1:00 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| That's similar to what I meant in my crayon version (which is the version I like best).   | |
| Author: | Aldara [ November 8th, 2011, 11:30 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I start, and travel haphazardly through the forest, turning wherever's simplest and every once and I while, I write something ludicrous to push my car over the speed bump. Then suddenly I stop, look back at my journey, and go back to the start. Then I redo this about a million times. This is why I only actually finish things when I'm doing NaNo -it won't let you start over until you're done. Which is helpful, but when I get back to those stories years from now, I'm probably going to restart completely. At least I'll have a finished road map to work from. | |
| Author: | AzlynRose [ December 13th, 2011, 11:57 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I'm a fairly slow writer. I have an old beater car which drives slow and steady until it breaks down every couple of miles/chapters, then I have to go and put in a new part before it can run again. Sometimes I take a wrong turn, then I have to backtrack, but usually I catch myself before the brick wall. I'm following a set of directions one a simple piece of paper, but the directions are rather brief and not in detail, so a lot of unexpected things may happen, some good, and some bad that happens to make my car old beater car need another new part. And that's pretty much how I write. Except for occasionally when I fuel my car with NaNoplus+, then the old beater runs faster before coming to dead stop and much in need of repairs after a month.   | |
| Author: | Aemi [ December 15th, 2011, 5:10 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
|  I love this thread! Let's see... I have a convertible sports car, and I love zooming along the lovely country roads, until I see something especially pretty, and stop the car by the side of the road, get out, and explore. And stay there. | |
| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ January 19th, 2012, 10:33 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| I love it, Aemi!  Andrew | |
| Author: | Aemi [ January 20th, 2012, 9:36 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
|  And then I force myself back into the car, pull the top up, and keep my eyes strictly on the road, promising myself I'll stop to look at the scenery on my next trip through here.   | |
| Author: | PrincessoftheKing [ January 20th, 2012, 10:09 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Car wrecks and flat tires | 
| How have I never seen this thread before?  My writing is so slow it's more like a leisurely stroll.  Beforehand, I get myself ready - put on a coat, tie my shoes, put my hair in a ponytail. And this always takes me way longer that it should. When I finally get out the door, I head off in a random direction, just to see where the road will take me. After a while, I get hopelessly lost, so I wander around aimlessly for a while. I'll stop and admire some flowers or watch the sunset, before realizing that I need to figure out where I am. And, eventually, I'll find the path again.  (Actually, that's a fairly good description of how I do everything, not just writing...  ) | |
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