I started this one months ago, and just now got back to it and finished it.

Carter
…Body {Eyes…… [Color (Almonds)
…………………………………… (Pennies at the bottom of a fountain)]
…………………….... [Depth (Looking up from the ground to the top of a tall fir tree)]
……………………… [Sparkle (Gold sparkling in the sun)
……………………………………. (The first ray of sun in the morning)]
……………………… [Twinkle (Sun hitting a mirror)
……………………………………. (A joke)]}
……… {Smile………………… (Sun glinting off the water)
………………………………..... (Pearl necklace)
………………………………..... (A secret)]}
...... {Hair...... [Color (Fawns’ fur)
............................... (Golden threads)]
.................... [Texture (Bristling pine)
................................ (Short grass in the wind)]}
.......{Face.................(A kind older brother)}
……… {Motion... [Grace (A monkey swinging from tree to tree)
…………………………………… (A dolphin leaping out of the water)
.................... [Strength (A hundred year old oak)
……………………………………… (A father as perceived by his child)]
………………………. [Speed (Wild deer)]
………………………. [Agility (A horse trained for jumping competitions)

…Spirit {………… [Quality (A kindly mentor)]
……………………… [Aspects (Zealous warrior)]
……………………… [Loyalty (Enduring rock)
……………………………………..(A mother bird sacrificing herself by leading a predator away from her nest)]
……………………… [Kindness (A father holding his child as it learns to walk)]
……………………… ………….....(An understanding friend)]
……………………… [Mischievous (A leprechaun)
……………………… ………….........(A mysterious smile)]}

…Mind {………………… [Clarity (A clear fountain)]
…………………………….. [Depth (An endless well)
………………………………………... (A mountain range on a clear day)]
…………………………….. [Knowledge (A teacher)
………………………………….............. (A well-seasoned traveller)]
...........................[Logic (A road disappearing into the sunset)
……………………………………….. (An arrow shot by an experienced archer)]}

…Soul {………………… [Depth (Looking along the length of the Great Wall of China)]
……………………………. [Purity (Snowflakes falling)]}

I have a Carter in one of my stories, but he isn't anything like yours.

The imagery is beautiful here. I especially like the color references, though the nature ones are crisp as well. I'm getting a nice contradiction; he sounds both old and young. He has some qualities of wise age with a spark of lighthearted youthfulness. How old is he?

He is in his early twenties.

Hmm... I tried to make him sound wiser than his age, but I think I might have overdone it a little.

No, I think that makes sense. He definitely has an essence of wisdom, but the little spark of youthfulness keeps him from sounding like an elder. Sounds like a delightful character.

Okay. Thank you!

I personally like him very much. He is easily one of my favourite characters.

Thanks.