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 Post subject: Aerwythe
PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 12:16 pm 
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The Aerwythe are one of the four races in Algramba. They are very similar to men in appearance. Though they are alike to men in appearance, they have slightly less brain power and more agility and arm strength; along with this, they have a steady hand and great eyesight, though poor reflexes. They do not like the sword, but think it is clumsy. They would prefer a bow over any other weapon and are the best archers of the four intelligent races in Algramba.

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 Post subject: Re: Arquero
PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 1:03 pm 
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I liked the name for that one, its French for archer.
Please, if you don't like the names I would love suggestions

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"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 2:09 pm 
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Great job on all your races and creatures! I really like the detail you used in describing them. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Aerwythe
PostPosted: November 25th, 2009, 10:18 am 
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thanks for the name Inesdar! :D

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
-Gandalf

"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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 Post subject: Re: Aerwythe
PostPosted: January 17th, 2010, 7:04 pm 
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I really like anything that starts with Ae; I have about five things in my book that do. Before you said this I was thinking: "These guys would be great archers" But then you said it and stole my thunder. ;) Rather than just physical, do you think that you could clarify other things? I would like to know more about their culture. The first thing that came to my mind was that they are slaves to a more intellectual race or a mercenary army for them (I do not know why I just shared this). Those were my first thoughts on the social status of the species (I am not implementing that they are or should be, that is just what immediatly came to my mind). I would like to hear more about their culture, habits, the geography of the land they live in, and their city and building structure...oh and of course what side they are on (If they are a grey race, you could say that too). Please, No offense from this message. If you have a problem just PM me. I'd love to hear more about this and your other species. :D VERY NICE JOB!!!

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 Post subject: Re: Aerwythe
PostPosted: January 20th, 2010, 12:52 pm 
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Thanks! They aren't a slave race, but they do sell themselves as mercenaries sometimes. Their culture I haven't worked on much, but most of them believe in one God named Elyeh (this is the true God.) They are usually good, but some go for evil.

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
-Gandalf

"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Current projects:
Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
_______________
Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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 Post subject: Re: Aerwythe
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Good, I know I'd hire them!

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 Post subject: Re: Aerwythe
PostPosted: February 21st, 2010, 8:20 pm 
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Good, I know I'd hire them!


thanks!

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
-Gandalf

"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
________________________

Current projects:
Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
_______________
Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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 Post subject: Re: Aerwythe
PostPosted: March 5th, 2010, 11:51 am 
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Uh...yeah! Thanks! ;)

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
-Gandalf

"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
________________________

Current projects:
Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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