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Author:  Seer of Endor [ January 5th, 2011, 4:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Seer's Essence 2.0
I was never completely satisfied with my first essence map of Seer, so I reworked it. I added some things, moved some things around, and basically fleshed it out a lot. I'm still not 100% satisfied, but this is definitely an improvement. Maybe someday I'll put together a map that I think covers it the best. I used the old XBasic syntax since Jay hasn't introduced the new syntax yet and this is the one I enjoy the most. Let me know what yall think.
Spirit{

  Depth[

    <August Rush>

    <a seagull’s flight>

    Clarity(

      <angel wings>

      <light reflected>

      <tuning fork's ring>)

    <a cry on the wind>]

  Perception[

    Insight(

      <artist’s eyes>

      <eye of dawn>

      <Blind man’s sense of hearing>

      <a holocaust witness>)]

  Longing[

    Intensity[

      Feeling(

        <an arrow in the shoulder>

        <the pain of a scorpion’s sting>

        <heartburn>)]

    Direction(

      <a runaway's father>

      <mother bear in separate cage from her children>

      <broken car in a mechanic's eyes>

      <father of a broken family>)]}

Power{

    Revelation[

      Dazzle( 

        <a kaleidoscope>

        <fireworks display>

        <monarch butterfly>)

      Shock(

        <the tunnel of light during a dizzy-spell>

        <walking in on a pair of adulterers>

        <waking up in the morning and being hit by the memory and realization that a loved one has died>

        <a sudden wave of intestinal nausea>)

      Conviction(

        <cancer diagnosis, followed by treatment options>

        <prison sentence>

        <Martin Luther>

        <blacksmith's forge entrapped in the bones>

        <Paul Revere's midnight ride>

        <a watchtower's beacon>

        <fire alarm's screech>

        <fire truck's siren>)    

      Purpose(

        <watchman>

        <smoke detector>

        <mediator>)]}
Author:  Elanhil [ January 6th, 2011, 10:33 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Seer's Essence 2.0
I like it! A lot! I especially like the "Holocaust witness" metaphor. Three thumbs up! ;)
Author:  Kiev Shawn [ January 6th, 2011, 10:38 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Seer's Essence 2.0
*offers Elanhil both of her thumbs* How about 4 thumbs up?

Nice work, Seer! I loved how "tuning fork's ring" made me feel.
Author:  Lady Shanai-Irisis [ February 16th, 2011, 11:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Seer's Essence 2.0
The Perception and Shock descriptions really stood out to me. This is an awesome map, Seer. I definitely see Seer very well. ;)
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