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Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ January 5th, 2011, 12:49 am ]
Post subject:  Darlene

Eh... my style of mapping seems to be SEM in reverse. I put the dashes after the categories instead of before the metaphors. That's easily fixed, I suppose, if I wanted to be consistent.

Darlene spends my whole book being dead. She doesn't die at the beginning of the book, she doesn't die in the book at all. Not even the prologue. The book starts with Darlene dead and she stays that way. However, she's one of my favorite characters and some might even say she's a main character, since everything that happens happens because of/for her. So she got an essence map. :D


Body –
Hair –
 Color –
  Raven feathers
  Shadows at night
  A deep hole

 Texture –
  Silk
  A new puppy
 Build –
  Slender –
   Bamboo shoots
   Willow wand
  Delicate –
   Snowflakes
   Indoor plants
 Eyes –
  Sparkle –
   Ripples on a pond
   Stars in the morning

  Depth –
   An endless path
   A thick forest

  Color –
   Doeskin
   Seasoned wood
   Dark honey

Spirit –

 Free –
  A river rushing to the ocean
  An untamed horse

 Unsullied/unbroken –
  A perfect garden
  A pond covered with lilypads
  A field of flowers

 Timid –
  A startled doe
  An uncertain lover

 Fear/uncertain –
  Gathering thunderclouds

 Gentle –
  Tender –
   New lettuce plants
   Spring time leaves
  Caring –
   A new mother
   A gardener

Soul –
 Honesty –
  Open –
   A large book
   A still lake

 Love –
  Strength –
   An old oak
  Unchanging/unyielding –
   A mountain range

 Courage –
  Lion
  Mother hen facing a fox

 Will –
  Unstoppable –
   A little child growing up
   The tide
  Persistent –
   A child wanting candy
   A boulder being worn away by water

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ January 5th, 2011, 8:16 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Darlene

That was great, Jaynin! =) I especially liked the 'new cabbage plants' reference.

eruheran

Author:  Kiev Shawn [ January 5th, 2011, 8:47 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Darlene

I love the "stars in the morning" reference too. :) Nice job!

Author:  Seer of Endor [ January 5th, 2011, 10:29 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Darlene

Nice metaphors, Katie! :)

Author:  wRen [ January 7th, 2011, 2:10 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Darlene

Great one! I especially like the 'pond covered in lily pads' reference!

Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ January 7th, 2011, 10:49 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Darlene

Thanks, ya'll.

Darlene and Christiana are actually very similar characters, and I was trying really hard not to use the same metaphores I'd already used for hers.

Author:  Rachel Newhouse [ January 7th, 2011, 1:46 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Darlene

Pretty! Darlene is a great character, an essential part of a soon-to-be great book. ;)

Author:  Lady Shanai-Irisis [ February 17th, 2011, 12:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Darlene

Love the fact a dead character has an Essence map. How awesome. ;) Great job, Jaynin!

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