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 Post subject: Maiden Eleanor of Nottinghamshire, Essence
PostPosted: January 3rd, 2011, 2:10 am 
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Body {Eyes [Colour (Greenish-blue
..................................<The rolling sea>
..................................<Iridescent stones>)]
....................[Depth (Semi-Deep
..................................<A castle dungeon>
..................................<A moderate lake>)]
....................[Sparkle (95%
..................................<A starry sky>
..................................<The reflection of a sunset on the rippling ocean>)]}
..........{Lips [Colour (Pinkish-mauve
..................................<A rose seen through frosty glass>
..................................<A little girl’s bedroom walls and curtains>)]
....................[Smile (Lovely/persuasive
..................................<A adulterer’s trick>
..................................<An engagement ring>)]
...........{Hair [Colour (Brown-toned auburn
..................................<Cherry maple>
..................................<A darkened chestnut horse’s mane>)]
.....................[Texture (Smooth/wavy
..................................<Calm ocean waves/eddies>
..................................<Wind currents>
..................................<Snakelike waves>)]}
...........{Face/Skin [Colour (Pale
..................................<Creamy Ivory>
..................................<Sugar cookies>)]
..............................[Texture (Mostly smooth
..................................<Sanded wood>
..................................<A trickle of water>
..................................<Silky sheets>)]}
...........{Motion [Grace (More than average *97%*
..................................<A ballerina>
..................................<A woodcarver>)]
..........................[Speed (Slightly less than average *65%*
..................................<Heavy snow drifts>
..................................<A bloated mother bear>
..........................[Strength (Average *67%*
..................................<A sapling>
..................................<Pashmina silk>)]}
...........{Beauty [(High *97%*
..................................<A rose in the midst of thistles>
..................................<A snowflake, unique/rare>
..................................<Pages of calligraphy>)]}
Spirit {Loyalty [Aspects (Hard to earn
..................................<A scholarship>
..................................<A lordship from serf-hood>)]}
...........{Fear [Aspects (Never shown
..................................<A terrible scar>
..................................<A lock combination>)
....................................(Rarely present
..................................<A gemstone>
..................................<A child’s rage>)]}
Mind {Clarity [To herself (Extremely
..................................<Air>
..................................<A brand new computer screen>)]
.......................[To others (Very
..................................<A glacial runoff stream>
..................................<Cleaned glass>)]}
..........{Knowledge [About academics (High *94%*
..................................<A library>
..................................<A professor>)]
..............................[About fighting/weaponry (Slightly above average *79%*
..................................<A learning scholar>
..................................<A thick book of notes and guides>)]}
...........{Logic [About emotions/morals (Slightly above average *78%*
..................................<A misty summer day>
..................................<The light of the sun as a cloud passes> )]
.......................[About battle strategy (Slightly above average *76%*
..................................<A new hunter>
..................................<A doctor fresh from medical school>)]}
Soul {Depth [(Medium *84%*
..................................<A large river>
..................................<A hallway void of life>
..................................<60% intensity dark chocolate>)]}
.........{Purity [(Moderate
..................................<A young cheetah>
..................................<A used sweater>)]}
.........{Longing [For riches (Slight *24%*
..................................<A baby not quite full>
..................................<A tired dog wanting just one more fetch>)]
.........................[For love/family (Much *87%*
..................................<A child wanting to explore the forest>
..................................<A kitten wanting cuddles>)]

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 Post subject: Re: Maiden Eleanor of Nottinghamshire, Essence
PostPosted: January 8th, 2011, 10:41 am 
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That's very well done. I could see the eyes perfectly. :)

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PostPosted: January 8th, 2011, 10:53 am 
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Love it! Well done, Lady Dusk!

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 Post subject: Re: Maiden Eleanor of Nottinghamshire, Essence
PostPosted: January 8th, 2011, 4:56 pm 
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Thanks you guys... She is one of my favourite characters in this story....

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PostPosted: February 17th, 2011, 12:12 am 
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Very beautiful, Lady Dusk.

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Lady Shanai-Irisis wrote:
Very beautiful, Lady Dusk.


Thanks! Again, she is one of my favourite characters so it wasn't too, too hard!

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