The History of Allabanne


My Son!” God said ecstatically as he ran to meet Jesus, the son He had sacrificed for the many people on earth His Son had done brilliantly. “Father!” Jesus said bowing as He greeted His God and father. Then God took Jesus and showed Him to all who where in Heaven and said,
“See my Son in whom I am well pleased. He went down to the world I created and took the sins of its people he brought many new lives to heaven and suffered at the hands of His people”
The father’s voice rang through the heavens and every one bowed and worshiped the Lord almighty. Then He continued to a more despairing matter
“Those people will be punished for the treatment of my Son, and therefore me. They have refused my Son and therefore refused me also. For this I will send them to a place yet to be discovered by man and I will show them my right hand. They will live there and see My anger come down onto them daily. All their descendants will live by the rules I will give them in this land called Allabanne meaning the land where God is present.”
Then there was a voice from an angle saying, “Which people will you send? My God, which of your Son’s tormenters must go?”
“All the Pharisees and false prophets who say they know the ways of their Lord, yet shun His Son,” God replied his voice like distant thunder as it rang through the heavens
“When Judas dies, I will send him to that land. The same to Herod, and many, oh how many people who knew what they said when they shouted “free Barabbas”. Also the Guards who mocked Jesus my Son as He died will go to this undiscovered land”
Every angel shuddered at the mention of these lost and dammed souls. Then God appointed an angle to each person who must go. To the new land the angels flew the accursed and their household to Allabanne during the night. When they awoke in this strange place God spoke to them the rules they must live by, He also changed some of them into odd beings The people who shouted free Barabbas he gave pointed ears and called them elves and he saw that this was good, The Pharisees and false prophets he gave long beards and short stature and he called them Dwarfs and he saw that this was good, and the guard’s and servers of the King that nailed Jesus to the cross and killed the young when he was born he gave beautiful wings because what they did was commanded to them and he saw that this was good.
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Then God set out deadly creatures among them. Such creatures are not found anywhere in Gods world called earth and he gave his biggest creation the Dragons a voice so the Dragons could speak
The Accursed mourned for weeks about the mistake they had made in mocking their creator. But more so for the life they and their decedents must live in the strange country, Allabane
But it was said that no one mourned more than Herod and on a night when Herod was much depressed about his first life when God appeared to him and said “My child what makes you so disheartened”
“My Lord” Herod said bowing, his facing in the ground “I do not deserve this second chance you have given me I let my pride get the better of me and I wanted your son, you! Dead you should have left me in Hell to rot with your enemies showing no mercy I do not deserve to be in your presence my Lord”
“Your humility and remorse give me great Joy; you have proven yourself a changed man”
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“I hope I am lord” Herod said his tears making mud of the dirt under him
“Then raise Herod take the crown of Allabanne and guide these people in a way that will be pleasing to me”
Herod looked up to see that God was gone and he knew what he must do even if it would bring him great pain this time he would do it God’s way.
From that day on Herod and his descendants would rule Allabanne. And since Herod did not cower away from the responsibility placed upon him he and all his descendants would live Immortal lives
Ana

That sounds really interesting! Does this have anything to do with your musicthiss story, or is it another story?
One thing is that I would be careful with the theology when you write stuff like this. It's just a story, but still be careful!
The only thing I noticed in this is that it seems strange that people who openly rejected Jesus would get a second chance. The people who shouted for Barabbas seem okay to use, but I'm not so sure about Judas. But that's just my opinion.
I do think that it's a really neat idea, though!

Yeah, it's the same as the Musicthiss story. And you have to remember that God loves everyone, even the people who openly reject Him and I'm sure he would give them a second chance.

That's true; I guess I wasn't thinking about that earlier.
Thanks for posting this though! Do the Musicthiss live in Allabanne?

Yeah My Musicthiss lives there

Thanks for participating in this thread! Ana and I have decided that it's time for it to be locked and Archived in the Vault.

Thank you!